My style is quite militant. It works well with Kublai, but not sure whether it treads thin ice here. Anyway, this is just a suggestion: let me know if you are ok with it.
Optimally we would need different language versions (at least for southern Europe, where many people are not that confortable with English), which need not be translations but would embody the personal style of the person writing it. David or I could write in Italian.
=========CALL TO ARMS PROPOSAL==============
Dear group members,
thanks for getting on board. My name is Alberto, and I write on behalf of the "rowing commitee" (pun intended: the work needed was not steering, but doing the trench work) which did some of the early work that resulted in the Open Declaration.
Here's the situation: David, Paul and Nadia will present the Declaration as a contribution to the Målmo Ministerial conference, a contribution from you and me and everybody who cares enough. I should stress that it is
the first time ever - in the rather complex Euro ritual - that a citizen declaration is presented alongside the declaration of the European ministers. A low level of endorsement would send the wrong signal to European governments: namely, that the citizenry does not really care about openness, transparency and accessibility to government on the net. It does not even care enough to muster a few thousand clicks on an "endorse it" button. This would be really, really, REALLY lame. Just think: the ministers are backed by their offices, budgets and democratic legitimacy. David, Paul and Nadia will only be backed by our voices (they are even paying for their own trips to Sweden). So our voices need to be many, and clear.
We of the rowing committee tapped into our social networks and pulled together 500+ endorsers. So far so good, but we are few, and we are running low on ammo. We started this group specifically as a way to reach out to people who care about the values reinforced in the Declaration. Now you are here; there's 600+ of us in the group. Are you up for rowing the last stretch with us? It's simple, really: invite your friends to join this group, endorse the Declaration and spread the word in their turn. We are aiming for 2000 endorsers, and we have less than three week until Målmo. There is no way we can make it alone. So, if you care, don't leave us alone!
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