Paper so far

[Shabnam Razeghian Jahromi]

Hi dear team :)

I started revising the paper and reading it from the beginning. I made changes as to me there were some redundancies in our content.

you can see the revision so far in v08_shabnam. Please do not freak out! I remove some parts to avoid redundancies for example explanation of TFDEA in research methodology. As I though we have talked about it extensively in Lit review. 

Again, do not freak out. I am not at all done with it. I am so  tired now and need to rest. I will edit the rest of the paper and add the result analysis tomorrow by 2:00 pm.

 I still need to add a bit more to the TFDEA Model section but mostly done till Data Collection section. 

I hope you are happy with the changes I've made so far. Comments are welcome.

Have a good night and thanks for all the hard effort,

Shabnam

[Saranya Durairajan]

Thanks Shabnam!

Maria and I are planning to add few more contents and graphs to the latest version now. Also, we are going to do an overall review of the contents so far. So, since you said you are going to update it by 2 pm today, can you send us the updated sections separately in e-mail so that we can go ahead and add them to the latest version?

Please let us know.

Thanks,

Saranya

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[Noshad]

You guys ROCK! Thank you....

Just tell me if I can be of any help. 

Noshad. 

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From: Saranya Durairajan <saranya.d...@pdx.edu>
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Sent: Monday, December 3, 2012 10:32 AM
Subject: Re: Paper so far

[Saranya Durairajan]

Sure Noshad. We will definitely bug you if we have any questions. I guess we are good so far :)

Btw, good luck for your exam preparation!

Cheers,

Saranya

[Shabnam Razeghian Jahromi]

Hi,

I'll call you in a bit

Shabnam

[Noshad]

Could you let me know once you guys finished your edit?(Maria + Saranya + Shabnam). I will review and make any edit needed. 

Just a note, as I have tried to do so, I think it's a good practice to move all supporting material to the Appendix, to avoid lenghty paper while providing as much info needed to comprehend the project. 

Can't stop thinking about our paper. We did such a wonderful job and the paper should really reflect that. 

Noshad. 

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From: Saranya Durairajan <saranya.d...@pdx.edu>
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Sent: Monday, December 3, 2012 10:42 AM