In my opinion, both the narrative and the more factually based argument can work as a good approach to illustrate certain philosophical standpoints. A narrative like this provides readers a more intimate and direct way to understand the writer’s experience and idea, however, some people may think this is not objective or comprehensive enough since it is so personal.
I do not feel the symbolical narrative is detracting from the author’s point. Like we discussed in class today, I think this is intentional to help build a sense of alienation to non-Spanish speaking readers. Because those readers are who have not experienced with the border effect before, similarly, they may not be able to understand the tension completely.
For me, personally I feel as though I am getting (to the best of my ability) what they author is saying, but consequently I do not feel as though the text is conveyed in a way that makes it significant. By this, I mean I feel as though the other readings were more important and more informative because of the structure, whereas with this text I feel as though I am just reading a storybook. In addition, while looking at this text I feel there is more bias that comes along because it is written at such a personal level.