COMPLAINT LETTER

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María Calderón Prieto

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Dec 5, 2011, 4:51:29 PM12/5/11
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Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing to complain about your new burglar alarm.

Briefly, the problem is that the alarm sometimes goes off when you are
not at home. As a result, the police come once the alarm has rung to
your house to see if there is a burglar. Then they realize that the
real problem is that the burglar alarm does not work properly.

I have already tried to talk with you about this matter but you are
never at home. I guess you are too busy. For that reason I am writing
to you this letter.


In order to resolve this trouble, I am requesting that you write a
letter to the company to find out what the problem is. I would like to
know if there is a way to communicate with you if this happen again so
please let me know.

Please contact me as soon as you solve the problem.

Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.

Yours faithfully

Written by : Cristina Castellano, Jose Carramolino, Sara Antunez &
Maria Calderon.

Mercedes Alcantara

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Dec 8, 2011, 5:04:06 PM12/8/11
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On Dec 5, 10:51 pm, María Calderón Prieto <maria.9.calde...@gmail.com>
wrote:
> Dear Sir or Madame,
>
> I am writing to complain Sp about your new burglar alarm.


>
> Briefly, the problem is that the alarm sometimes goes off when you are
> not at home. As a result, the police come once the alarm has rung to

> your house O. to see if there is a burglar. Then they realize that the


> real problem is that the burglar alarm does not work properly.
>

> I have already tried to talk with Ww. you about this matter but you are


> never at home. I guess you are too busy. For that reason I am writing
> to you this letter.
>
> In order to resolve this trouble, I am requesting that you write a
> letter to the company to find out what the problem is. I would like to

> know if there is a way to communicate with you if this happen Gr. again so
> please let me know X.

ANGELO

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Jan 30, 2012, 12:34:37 PM1/30/12
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MARIA, DO YOU FEEL LIKE CORRECTING YOUR LETTER HERE?

Mercedes, thanks for your corrections... Could you write your codes in capital letters the next time? It would be easier to see them...

Thanks to both of you!

ANGELO

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Jan 30, 2012, 12:35:54 PM1/30/12
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El lunes 5 de diciembre de 2011 22:51:29 UTC+1, María Calderón Prieto escribió:
Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing to complain NO SP, IT S OK about your new burglar alarm.

Briefly, the problem is that the alarm sometimes goes off when you are

not at home. As a result, the police ALWAYS comeS once the alarm has rung to


your house to see if there is a burglar. Then they realize that the
real problem is that the burglar alarm does not work properly.

ANGELO

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Jan 30, 2012, 12:37:35 PM1/30/12
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El lunes 5 de diciembre de 2011 22:51:29 UTC+1, María Calderón Prieto escribió:
Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing to complain about your new burglar alarm.

Briefly, the problem is that the alarm sometimes goes off when you are
not at home. As a result, the police come once the alarm has rung to
your house to see if there is a burglar. Then they realize that the
real problem is that the burglar alarm does not work properly.

I have already tried to talk with you about this matter but you are
never at home. I guess you are too busy. For that reason I am writing
to you this letter.


In order to resolve this trouble, I am requesting that you write a
letter to the company to find out what the problem is. I would like to

know if there is a way to communicate with you if this happenS again so
please let me know. ST

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