COMPLAINT COMPOSITION - NA1
Julio Alvarez - A1
Here you have our complaint composition:
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17 Norwey Street
Fuenlabrada 28940
5th December, 2011
Fuenlabrada Local Council
10 Plaza street
Fuenlabrada
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to an unfair parking fine that took place
last 2nd of November.
I've recently parked my car in Sesame Street number 6. I did not see
any parking sign there.
When I came back to retire my car, I found out that I had been fined,
and I realised that
there was a non-parking sign hidden behind a tree.
I have already pursued this problem with the local police, and as
result I was advised to contact your administration.
In order to resolve this matter and to avoid people to be fined again
for the same reason,
I suggest the sign should be located in a better place with more
visibility for every body.
I also expect you to consider the possibility of refunding my fine.
Otherwise, I will be forced to
take legal actions against your administration.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John Stevent.
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Group mails/names: hecto...@hotmail.com / marm...@gmail.com /
adar...@gmail.com / Beatriz Gomez / julio.alva...@gmail.com.
(I don't know if mails are well-written).
Let's play folks !!!
David X
On Dec 5, 9:10 pm, Julio Alvarez - A1 <julio.alvarez.mol...@gmail.com>
wrote:
> Hi Angelo,
>
> Here you have our complaint composition:
>
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>
> 17 Norwey Street
> Fuenlabrada 28940
> 5th December, 2011
>
> Fuenlabrada Local Council
> 10 Plaza street
> Fuenlabrada
>
> Dear Sir or Madam,
>
> I am writing with regard to an unfair parking fine that took place
> last 2nd of November.
>
> I've recently parked my car in Sesame Street number 6. I did not see
> any parking sign there.
> When I came back to retire WW my car, I found out that I had been fined,
> and I realised that
> there was a non-parking sign hidden behind a tree.
>
> I have already pursued this problem with the local police, and as
> result I was advised to contact your administration.
>
> In order to resolve WW this matter and to avoid people to be VT fined again
> for the same reason,
> I suggest the sign should be located in a better WW place with more
> visibility for every body WW.
>
> I also expect you to consider the possibility of refunding my fine.
> Otherwise, I will be forced to
> take legal actions against your administration.
>
> I look forward to hearing from you soon.
>
> Yours Faithfully,
> John Stevent.
>
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>
> Group mails/names: hectorf...@hotmail.com / marmac...@gmail.com /
> adara...@gmail.com / Beatriz Gomez / julio.alvarez.mol...@gmail.com.
Julio Alvarez - A1
I've corrected some mistakes. Guys, I need help with some doubts I
still have (see my comments to David's corrections). Maybe someone can
help me with them. Thanks ;-)
Fuenlabrada Local Council
> 10 Plaza street
> Fuenlabrada
> Dear Sir or Madam,
> I am writing with regard to an unfair parking fine that took place
> last 2nd of November.
> I've recently parked my car in Sesame Street number 6. I did not see
> any parking sign there.
> When I came back to retire WW (why do you think it's wrong?? what do you suggest here?) my car, I found out that I had been fined,
> and I realised that
> there was a non-parking sign hidden behind a tree.
> I have already pursued this problem with the local police, and as
> result I was advised to contact your administration.
> In order to resolve WW (could be solve? why not resolve?) this matter and to avoid people being fined again
> for the same reason,
> I suggest the sign should be located in a better WW (what do you suggest here?) place with more
> visibility for everybody.
> I also expect you to consider the possibility of refunding my fine.
> Otherwise, I will be forced to
> take legal actions against your administration.
> I look forward to hearing from you soon.
> Yours Faithfully,
> John Stevent.
David X
Julio Alvarez
used "retired", I guess Spanish translation, unless the car was 65
years old :-). Here a new version with all corrections:
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17 Norwey Street
Fuenlabrada 28940
5th December, 2011
Fuenlabrada Local Council
10 Plaza street
Fuenlabrada
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to an unfair parking fine that took place
last 2nd of November.
I've recently parked my car in Sesame Street number 6. I did not see
any parking sign there. When I came back to move my car,
I found out that I had been fined, and I realised that there was a
non-parking sign hidden behind a tree.
I have already pursued this problem with the local police, and as
result I was advised to contact your administration.
In order to solve this matter and to avoid people being fined again
for the same reason, I suggest the sign should be located in a
suitable
place with more visibility for everybody.
I also expect you to consider the possibility of refunding my fine.
Otherwise, I will be forced to take legal actions against your
administration.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John Stevent.
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On 9 dic, 23:57, David X <teacher...@gmail.com> wrote:
> It should be "solve" because resolve is a decision or a resolution.
> Retire means to stop working because your older than 65.
> Better place... I'm not sure enough but I suggest "more appropiate" or
> "proper"
>
> 2011/12/9 Julio Alvarez - A1 <julio.alvarez.mol...@gmail.com>
ANGELO
ANGELO
El sábado 10 de diciembre de 2011 11:50:33 UTC+1, Julio Alvarez escribió:
Thanks for your help. I totally agree with you. I don't know why I
used "retired", I guess Spanish translation, unless the car was 65
years old :-). Here YOU HAVE a new version with all corrections:
On 9 dic, 23:57, David X <teach...@gmail.com> wrote:
> It should be "solve" because resolve is a decision or a resolution.
> Retire means to stop working because your older than 65.
> Better place... I'm not sure enough but I suggest "more appropiate" or
> "proper"
>
> 2011/12/9 Julio Alvarez - A1 <julio.alva...@gmail.com>
> > On 9 dic, 18:37, David X <teach...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > On Dec 5, 9:10 pm, Julio Alvarez - A1 <julio.alva...@gmail.com>
> > > > Group mails/names: hecto...@hotmail.com / marm...@gmail.com /
> > > > adar...@gmail.com / Beatriz Gomez / julio.alva...@gmail.com.
ANGELO
El lunes 30 de enero de 2012 20:28:44 UTC+1, ANGELO escribió:
El sábado 10 de diciembre de 2011 11:50:33 UTC+1, Julio Alvarez escribió:
Thanks for your help. I totally agree with you. I don't know why I
used "retired", I guess Spanish translation, unless the car was 65
years old :-). Here YOU HAVE a new version with all THE corrections:
On 9 dic, 23:57, David X <teac...@gmail.com> wrote:
> It should be "solve" because resolve is a decision or a resolution.
> Retire means to stop working because your older than 65.
> Better place... I'm not sure enough but I suggest "more appropiate" or
> "proper"
>
> 2011/12/9 Julio Alvarez - A1 <julio....@gmail.com>
> > On 9 dic, 18:37, David X <teac...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > On Dec 5, 9:10 pm, Julio Alvarez - A1 <julio....@gmail.com>
> > > > Group mails/names: hect...@hotmail.com / mar...@gmail.com /
> > > > ada...@gmail.com / Beatriz Gomez / julio....@gmail.com.