NA1 - Complaint Letter

[Begoña Dominguez]

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the parking fine I got last week.

Mainly, the matter is that few days ago I went downtown and I parked
my car in Genova Street. At that moment I thought that it was legal
because I didn’t see any sign. But when I returned back to the car I
realized that I had got a parking fine. Then I looked for a no-parking
sign, and there was one but behind a tree, so it was almost impossible
to see it. I regard this whole as an abuse since the signal is not
well placed. You should be more responsible about the traffic signals.

I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,
who have advised me to contact you immediately.

In order to resolve this matter I am requesting that you remove my
parking fine and take action in order to change the place of that
signal. In that way people can see it without problems and you avoid
more parking fines which are not proper.

Please contact me within fifteen days of the date of this letter to
confirm that these steps have been taken. If you need to contact me by
telephone, you may reach me at (00 34) 123-456.

Thank you for your prompt attention on this matter.

Yours faithfully,

Cristina, Juan Luis, David, Alicia and Begoña

[Begoña Dominguez]

Sorry, I forgot to copy all the letter. Here is it again. I apologize
for any inconvenience caused.
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Norwey Street

28940 Fuenlabrada

Madrid

5th December

Madrid Local Council
Villa Square
28028 Madrid

[pily Minin]

    Hello
            In my opinion, I found this mistakes.   Regards  Pily

> Date: Tue, 6 Dec 2011 04:38:45 -0800
> Subject: Re: NA1 - Complaint Letter
> From: domingu...@gmail.com
> To: eoi-writing-comp...@googlegroups.com

>
> Sorry, I forgot to copy all the letter. Here is it again. I apologize
> for any inconvenience caused.
> ******************************************************************************
>
> Norwey Street
>
> 28940 Fuenlabrada
>
> Madrid
>
> 5th December
>
> Madrid Local Council
> Villa Square
> 28028 Madrid
>
>
> Dear Sir or Madam,
>
> I am writing with regard to the parking fine I got last week.
>

> Mainly, the matter is that few days ago I went X downtown and I parked
> my car in Genova Street. At that moment P I thought that GR it was legal
> because I didn’t ST  see any sign WW . But when I returned back to the car SUB
> realized that I had got a parking fine. Lo Then I looked for WW a no-parking
> sign Ww, and there was one but behind a tree, so it was almost impossible
> to see it. I regard this whole WW as an abuse since the signal is not
> well placed. L You should be more responsible about the WW traffic signals.

>
> I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,
> who have advised me to contact you immediately.
>

> In order to resolve this matter PP I am requesting that you remove my

> parking fine and take action  in order to change the place of that

> signal. In that way P people can VT see it without problems and you avoid VT
> more parking fines which are not proper.SP

[ANGELO]

I AGREE WITH PILAR MISTAKES AND I FOUND SOMETHING ELSE TOO...

El martes 6 de diciembre de 2011 13:38:45 UTC+1, Begoña Dominguez escribió:

Sorry, I forgot to copy all the letter. Here is it again. I apologize
for any inconvenience caused.
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Norwey Street
 
28940 Fuenlabrada
 
Madrid
 
5th December

Madrid Local Council
Villa Square
28028 Madrid

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the parking fine I got last week.

Mainly, the matter is that few days ago I went downtown and I parked

my car in Genova Street. At that moment I thought that it (IT=the street????) was legal
because I didn’t see any sign. But when I returned (back) to the car I

realized that I had got a parking fine. Then I looked for a no-parking
sign, and there was one but behind a tree, so it was almost impossible
to see it. I regard this whole as an abuse since the signal is not
well placed. You should be more responsible about the traffic signals.