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noelia

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Dec 6, 2011, 7:52:05 AM12/6/11
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16 Trees Square
Fuenlabrada
28940
5th December 2011

Fuenlabrada Local Council
327 Parkin Avenue
Fuenlabrada, 28940

Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to complain about a problem that I had when I parked my
car near te Central Station two weeks ago.

Briegly, what happened is that I was drivin my car and I decided to
park it in a parking that I thought was legal. When I come back to
pick up the car, I realizad that I had been fined because of the fact
that a no-parking sign was hidden venid a colose tree.
I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,
who has recomendad me to adress you as soon as posible.

In order to resolve this mattere I am requesting that you should
placed the no-parking sign in a place where it would be visible.

Furthermore and in compensation for this unfair incident, I would like
my Money to be refun.

If you still have any question you Could contact me by telepone at
00224651.

Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.

Tours faithfully.

Antonio Palomo.
Berta Fernández.
Natalia Martín
David López.
Noelia Toribio

Alba Alcaide Navarro

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Dec 6, 2011, 11:25:56 AM12/6/11
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From my point of view I see these mistakes. Good job guys!!

> 16 Trees Square
> Fuenlabrada
> 28940
> 5th December 2011
>
> Fuenlabrada Local Council
> 327 Parkin Avenue
> Fuenlabrada, 28940
>
> Dear Sir or Madam:
> I am writing to complain about a problem that I had when I parked my
> car near te Central Station two weeks ago.
>

> Briegly, what happened is gr that I was drivin sp my car and I decided to


> park it in a parking that I thought was legal. When I come back to

> pick up the car, I realizad sp that I had been fined because of the fact
> that a no-parking sign was hidden venid sp colose tree.


> I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,

> who has recomendad sp me to adress you as soon as posible.
>
> In order to resolve this mattere sp I am requesting that you should
> placed the no-parking ww sign in a place where it would be visible.


>
> Furthermore and in compensation for this unfair incident, I would like
> my Money to be refun.
>

> If you still have any question you Could contact me by telepone at st


> 00224651.
>
> Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.
>

> Tours faithfully. sp

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ANGELO

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Dec 8, 2011, 3:37:38 PM12/8/11
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hello everybody!

LET S CORRECT AND ADD THE MISTAKES IN CAPITAL LETTERS LIKE SP GR OR AG, OK?

it would be definetely easier to see the mistakes then!

Alba, can you correct the complaint letter again?

Thanks in advance!

Greetings

Angelo

Mercedes Alcantara

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Dec 8, 2011, 5:14:48 PM12/8/11
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On Dec 6, 1:52 pm, noelia <noeliatori...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 16 Trees Square
> Fuenlabrada
> 28940
> 5th December 2011
>
> Fuenlabrada Local Council
> 327 Parkin Avenue
> Fuenlabrada, 28940
>
> Dear Sir or Madam:

> I am writing to complain Sp. about a problem that I had when I parked my
> car near te Sp Central Station two weeks ago.
>
> Briegly, what happened is that I was drivin Sp my car and I decided to
> park it in a parking that I thought was legal. When I come X back to
> pick up the car, I realizad Sp that I had been fined because of the fact
> that a no-parking sign was hidden venid X a colose tree.


> I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,

> who has recomendad Sp me X to adress X you as soon as posible.
>
> In order to resolve this mattere Sp I am requesting that you should
> placed X the no-parking sign in a place where it would be visible.


>
> Furthermore and in compensation for this unfair incident, I would like

> my Money to be refun X.


>
> If you still have any question you Could contact me by telepone at
> 00224651.
>
> Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.
>

> Tours Sp faithfully.

Alba Alcaide Navarro

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Dec 9, 2011, 3:23:36 AM12/9/11
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From my point of view I see these mistakes. Good job guys!!

16 Trees Square


> Fuenlabrada
> 28940
> 5th December 2011

> Fuenlabrada Local Council
> 327 Parkin Avenue
> Fuenlabrada, 28940

> Dear Sir or Madam:
> I am writing to complain about a problem that I had when I parked my
> car near te SP Central Station two weeks ago.

> Briegly, what happened is GR that I was drivin SP my car and I decided to
> park it in a parking that I thought was legal. When I come back to
> pick up the car, I realizad SP that I had been fined because of the fact
> that a no-parking sign was hidden venid SP colose tree.


> I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,

> who has recomendad SP me to adress you as soon as posible.

> In order to resolve this mattere SP I am requesting that you should
> placed the no-parking WW sign in a place where it would be visible.

> Furthermore and in compensation for this unfair incident, I would like

> my Money to be refun.

> If you still have any question you Could contact me by telepone at ST
> 00224651.

> Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.

> Tours faithfully. SP

ANGELO

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Jan 30, 2012, 12:39:23 PM1/30/12
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El viernes 9 de diciembre de 2011 09:23:36 UTC+1, Alba Alcaide Navarro escribió:
From my point of view I see these mistakes. Good job guys!!

16 Trees Square
> Fuenlabrada
> 28940
> 5th December 2011

> Fuenlabrada Local Council
> 327 Parkin Avenue
> Fuenlabrada, 28940

> Dear Sir or Madam:
> I am writing to complain about a problem that I had when I parked my
> car near te SP Central Station two weeks ago.

> Briegly SP, what happened is GR that I was drivin SP my car and I decided to
> park it in a parking that I thought SUB was legal. When I come GR VT back to


> pick up the car, I realizad SP that I had been fined because of the fact
> that a no-parking sign was hidden venid  SP colose tree.
> I have already pursued this matter with the local police department,
> who has recomendad SP me to adress you as soon as posible.

> In order to resolve this mattere SP I am requesting that you should
> placed the no-parking WW sign in a place where it would be visible.

> Furthermore and in compensation for this unfair incident, I would like

> my Money to be refun SP.

> If you still have any question you Could SP contact me by telepone at ST
> 00224651.

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