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My  Sister
My  sister  is   a  teacher   in  middle  school  and  she  is
teaching  chinese .  She  is  a  very  strict  to  her  students
also  to   my  brother  and  me .  Her  eyes  is  bright  and  big .
She  is  taller  than  me .  Now   she  is  a  mother ,  and  her
daughter  is  about  five  years   old  .   She   often  says
everyone   have    the   right   to  change  his/her   life .


On 10月10日, 下午10时41分, englishwritingon <hjail...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Dear all,
>     Please post your descriptions by replying this post for the
> convenience of our reading!
>
> On 9月29日, 下午9时12分, flora <czdj...@163.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> >                  My Grandfather
> >   My grandfather is a purposeful man. I think there's no diffculty
> > can threaten him.
> >   Grandfather had an unfortunate childhood, but he never gave in to
> > the bad fate. Grandfather was an orthan and was brought up by his two
> > elder sister. There were few books to read, but no matter where
> > grandfather was, he tried his best to know more about the new words.
> > When he grew older,he managed to make money by himself.
> >   Grandfather always did something strange that other people
> > thonght. He and grandmother have five children, four daughter and one
> > son. In old society, women are not equal to men. So girls would never
> > send to school. But Grandfather did. He sent all his children to
> > school. However, there was so many people said that grandfather was
> > foolish. Hearing of that, grandfather smiled and said, "They are all
> > my children. I think girls should have the same rights in the
> > society." In order to pay the school for the childrens' education,
> > grandfather worked so hard. He said that he would never repent that.
> >   Now grandfather often tells us some stories that people keep
> > their career aims constantly in view. He hopes that we can learn
> > something new from them and achieve our dreams in the future.
> > How passionate grandfather was. I love my grandfather in my heart of
> > hearts.
>
> > On 9月18日, 上午1时20分, englishwritingon <hjail...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > > Dear all,
>
> > >     In the following weeks we are going to describe a person, an
> > > object and a place. Please reply me with your writings and you will
> > > get extra marks at the end of the term.
>
> > >    By the way, for the first assignment, please note the subject
> > > of your email should be "first assignment", and the attachment of your
> > > writing (for the convenience of editing) should be entitled as" your
> > > writing course code_ the title of your writing", for example, "3A1_(下划
> > > 线)My Father", and the attachment of the checklist "3A1_checklist".
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jolley

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Nov 2, 2009, 3:04:13 AM11/2/09
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My math teacher

Mr.Li ,a wonderful ,jolly ,energtic man who is about 1.8 metres
high.In his thirties,he has many hobbies ,such as writing,basketball
especially dancing .He is well-known for his dancing in my middle high
school.

I’d say all my classmates admired him because he was a responsible
and dedicated teacher,but the most important reason was that he seemed
to be interested in his every student.I vividly remembered that day
that he presevered to have class though he was so tired that his nose
started bleeding.We were frightened as well as moved in that time.From
then on ,I made up my mind to study math better and also it was my
responsibility to sudy well.Our math score was among the first top
among the whole grade.We all were good student in his eyes.He was
always along with us whenever and whoever need him.”I’m your
teacher,don’t worry to ask me for help” he always said.

His class was like him---energetic and wonderful.His high
voice,humous and interesting teaching style made his class was an
enjoyment for us.It was hard for us to fall asleep even if you were
very sleepy.

I figured that the most important thing he taught us was not math
but to maintain a positive attitude towards life and have a fighting
spirit against any difficulties in life.He always encouged us to do
our best in study .He used to say “It doesn’t matter if you win or
not.The important things is to do your best and keep going.”

He is my favourite teacher in my middle high school.




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