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Oct 10, 2009, 11:17:52 PM10/10/09
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I think this article is very excellent. The author has deep emotion to his/her purposeful grandfather.The grandfather send his daughters to school,this is foolish in others' eyes in old society,but he didn't think so.He is a beloved person.
 
 
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发件人: "englishwritingon"<hjai...@gmail.com>;
发送时间: 2009年10月10日(星期六) 晚上10:41
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主题: [englishwritingon:1401] Re: Description
 

Dear all,
        Please post your descriptions by replying this post for the
convenience of our reading!

On 9月29日, 下午9时12分, flora <czdj...@163.com> wrote:
>                  My Grandfather
>   My grandfather is a purposeful man. I think there's no diffculty
> can threaten him.
>   Grandfather had an unfortunate childhood, but he never gave in to
> the bad fate. Grandfather was an orthan and was brought up by his two
> elder sister. There were few books to read, but no matter where
> grandfather was, he tried his best to know more about the new words.
> When he grew older,he managed to make money by himself.
>   Grandfather always did something strange that other people
> thonght. He and grandmother have five children, four daughter and one
> son. In old society, women are not equal to men. So girls would never
> send to school. But Grandfather did. He sent all his children to
> school. However, there was so many people said that grandfather was
> foolish. Hearing of that, grandfather smiled and said, "They are all
> my children. I think girls should have the same rights in the
> society." In order to pay the school for the childrens' education,
> grandfather worked so hard. He said that he would never repent that.
>   Now grandfather often tells us some stories that people keep
> their career aims constantly in view. He hopes that we can learn
> something new from them and achieve our dreams in the future.
> How passionate grandfather was. I love my grandfather in my heart of
> hearts.
>
> On 9月18日, 上午1时20分, englishwritingon <hjail...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> > Dear all,
>
> >     In the following weeks we are going to describe a person, an
> > object and a place. Please reply me with your writings and you will
> > get extra marks at the end of the term.
>
> >    By the way, for the first assignment, please note the subject
> > of your email should be "first assignment", and the attachment of your
> > writing (for the convenience of editing) should be entitled as" your
> > writing course code_ the title of your writing", for example, "3A1_(下划
> > 线)My Father", and the attachment of the checklist "3A1_checklist".
>
> >    Just feel free to send your questions to hjail...@sohu.com if
> > you have any doubt.- 隐藏被引用文字 -
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