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zxl-flora
Oct 10, 2009, 8:51:30 AM10/10/09
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I love you my dear brother!!!!!!!!!
dora
Oct 10, 2009, 11:18:57 PM10/10/09
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This is very brief.
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From: "zxl-flora"<zhangxia...@126.com>;
Date: 2009年10月10日(星期六) 晚上8:51
To: "english writing on"<englishw...@googlegroups.com>;
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mindy
Oct 11, 2009, 5:12:54 AM10/11/09
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A lovely dog
I love animals very much . We have a litter black dog . His name is
Paul .His eyes look so bright . He is quick-witted . Always if the
strager comes to our house , he will barks loudly to remind us . Once
time , my aunt came to visit us , Paul followed her no matter where
she went . I could not understand . At last , my aunt had to finish
her visit a litter early .
I love animals very much . We have a litter black dog . His name is
Paul .His eyes look so bright . He is quick-witted . Always if the
strager comes to our house , he will barks loudly to remind us . Once
time , my aunt came to visit us , Paul followed her no matter where
she went . I could not understand . At last , my aunt had to finish
her visit a litter early .
豆怡
Oct 11, 2009, 9:17:52 AM10/11/09
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The Whether in Lan Zhou
I just experienced autumn and winter in Lan Zhou.
Lan Zhou is a industry city is famous for Lan Lian and Lan Hua,so the
air is polluted seriously.When I am a little child,Lan Zhou's air is
grey.Now it gets better,but it is very clear and fresh.Sometimes we
even can't see the stars in the air and the situation is worse in Xi
Gu community .
Lan Zhou's climate is a little dry and has a lot of sand storms.It
makes people so afraid because everywhere is yellow .There are a lot
of winds that become very terrible sometimes,because it has a strange
sound like a goast.And windows always shake by it.At the same
time,sands and specks come together with it.If experience a
sandstorm,you'll feel it's so dirty that your hair is full of little
stones.
In winter,Lan Zhou's temperature drops so down.It becomesso cold that
the water on the ground will turn to ice immediately.It doesn't have
very great snow but the snow in Lan Zhou is not small yet.Last
year,Lan zhou just had a little snow,snowing only a few times.So the
wether become so dry that many people got cold.
Yellow River flows through the Lan Zhou city.The views of the Yellow
River are very beautiful.Only on the bank of the river you can feel
the light wind through your face.There are some trees and flowers
there and places to have a rest.It is good for health to have a walk
on it.
But Lan Zhou's green cover is too low and industry industry developing
pollutes the air.That's the reason why Lan Zhou's weather is so bad.I
think the government must take some effectional ways to solute this
question.Not only the government but also the citizens must do
somethings to our common home!
I just experienced autumn and winter in Lan Zhou.
Lan Zhou is a industry city is famous for Lan Lian and Lan Hua,so the
air is polluted seriously.When I am a little child,Lan Zhou's air is
grey.Now it gets better,but it is very clear and fresh.Sometimes we
even can't see the stars in the air and the situation is worse in Xi
Gu community .
Lan Zhou's climate is a little dry and has a lot of sand storms.It
makes people so afraid because everywhere is yellow .There are a lot
of winds that become very terrible sometimes,because it has a strange
sound like a goast.And windows always shake by it.At the same
time,sands and specks come together with it.If experience a
sandstorm,you'll feel it's so dirty that your hair is full of little
stones.
In winter,Lan Zhou's temperature drops so down.It becomesso cold that
the water on the ground will turn to ice immediately.It doesn't have
very great snow but the snow in Lan Zhou is not small yet.Last
year,Lan zhou just had a little snow,snowing only a few times.So the
wether become so dry that many people got cold.
Yellow River flows through the Lan Zhou city.The views of the Yellow
River are very beautiful.Only on the bank of the river you can feel
the light wind through your face.There are some trees and flowers
there and places to have a rest.It is good for health to have a walk
on it.
But Lan Zhou's green cover is too low and industry industry developing
pollutes the air.That's the reason why Lan Zhou's weather is so bad.I
think the government must take some effectional ways to solute this
question.Not only the government but also the citizens must do
somethings to our common home!
豆怡
Oct 11, 2009, 9:21:36 AM10/11/09
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An Amazing Trip
When I was twelve years old, I got a really amazing holiday---
Botanical Garden trip. I can’t forget it because of a deer named Shay
who finally became my friend.
It was the first time when I saw him and he just fallowed with me in
the cage as I walked around the cage. He caused my attention, at the
same time I walked to him. I felt it was amazing at that moment and we
might know with each other before. I believed we must be friends.
After that I went to see him every day. It was amazing that he waited
for me at the same place every time. Maybe he also needed care from
who really realized him and he must have a lot of pain in this small
cage. I could understand him because we had something in common.
During that time, I talked to him about my mind and I could felt that
he could understand me. Even though he couldn’t express himself in
language, I could read it through his eyes.
I don’t want to remember the view that him fallowed to me until he
couldn’t move when we leaved with each other. But I’ll remember this
valuable experience that we touched each other by heart for ever.
When I was twelve years old, I got a really amazing holiday---
Botanical Garden trip. I can’t forget it because of a deer named Shay
who finally became my friend.
It was the first time when I saw him and he just fallowed with me in
the cage as I walked around the cage. He caused my attention, at the
same time I walked to him. I felt it was amazing at that moment and we
might know with each other before. I believed we must be friends.
After that I went to see him every day. It was amazing that he waited
for me at the same place every time. Maybe he also needed care from
who really realized him and he must have a lot of pain in this small
cage. I could understand him because we had something in common.
During that time, I talked to him about my mind and I could felt that
he could understand me. Even though he couldn’t express himself in
language, I could read it through his eyes.
I don’t want to remember the view that him fallowed to me until he
couldn’t move when we leaved with each other. But I’ll remember this
valuable experience that we touched each other by heart for ever.
豆怡
Oct 11, 2009, 9:23:13 AM10/11/09
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My Favorite Film---Just like Life Journey
In a way, it’s films that give me a whole life journey, even though
I’m only eighteen years old. They show me different life experiences
of different people and taught me the true meaning of life. So they
are all my favorite films.
Work Hard for My Life
Hard working is almost everything in my life since I got into primary
school. My parents, friends and teachers put so many pressures on me
that I was really driven mud. But the fact that I was not the best in
my class let everyone down! During that time, I wanted to give up
working hard and just do something that I really want to do. But I
could not. That made me hurt and I could do nothing except bursting
into tears.
I saw the film---Homeless to Harvard when I was in third grade in
middle school. The year was very important to me; my future was set on
it.
Liz said,” My mother was dying, my father was gone…What’s a home
anyway; a roof, a bed, a place where when you go there, they have to
take you? If so then I was fifteen when I became homeless.” I can
still remember these words. I was wondering how a sixteen-year-old
girl said words like “You’re 16 years old with an 8th grade education
and you’re on a downward spiral that would end in a worse place than
you ever dreamed.”
Then I compared the living environment of Liz with my own. I had a
happy family and lived a comfortable life. Just owning to some
difficulties, I wanted to give up my life. How could that odd idea
come into my mind? It took me completely by surprise. Just like Liz
said, “I really… I feel that I was lucky because any sense of security
was put out from under me. So I was forced to look forward. I had to.”
Maybe I just felt that I needn’t care about those questions. But that
was my life, my further, no one could help me except myself. Ok “All
right, I’m goanna work as hard as I possibly can and see what
happens.” And then I was admitted by the key high school after
overcoming my disorientation.
It was Liz who told me I should work hard for my life!
Be True to My Life
There are so many amazing things in this world and everyone wants to
be successful. But they always ask themselves, “Why do I want to get
them?”, when they can lay their hands upon everything they want.
They just get most other people want because of vanity and greed, at
the same time they go against their hearts.
After watching the film Howl’s Moving Castle, I found that Howl was
the representation of those people. He lost his heart for powers. At
last, when he found what he really wanted, he was full of courage to
try to be free. Of course, Sophie was a very important reason.
Howl reminded me that if you keep chasing your dream so hard, you will
be driven to death. If I just know I must work hard, but don’t know
how to fallow my heart, most probably I’ll step on a wrong track.
It was Howl and Sophie who told me I should be true to my heart!
Learn to Let Go
In the film Over Her Dead Body, I think Kate is a very lovely girl.
Yes, of course, it’s hard for everyone to accept the truth that your
lover will some day love other people. But she did! That’s the real
meaning of loving someone---Let him go if he can’t get happiness with
you.
This is true for not only lovers, but also for family members and
friends, including everyone you love. Let them go if you can not bring
happiness to them. Be a leader to everyone you love, lead them to get
on the road to a happier life. That’s all I could do for them. If they
get it, I’ll get it as well.
It was Kate who told me how to let go!
There are angels in every film who show the right way for me. Maybe my
life is not as amazing life as in films, but I read the meaning of the
angels; maybe my experiences are not as rich as films, but I treasure
them. They have always been my life, I really feel lucky that I could
see so many good films. They are all my favorite films that teach me
how to live my life, how to be an upright person.
Working hard, being true to my heart and letting go are different
parts of my life that I should learn through the whole life journey.
Maybe one day I could read the truth of my whole life. William Blake
once said “To the world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wild
flower” is the truth of life. That is what my favorite films told me
as well.
豆怡
Oct 11, 2009, 9:24:38 AM10/11/09
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A Hurry Day
I think it’s hard for me to capture the moment when I came to my
college firstly. It gave me a complex feeling, but it was really a
hurry day.
My father and I went up at six o’clock in the morning, and then we got
to college at seven o’clock. There were so many people when we arrived
there and there were so many things we should do.
It was lucky that we got the help o two kind girls, at the same time
rainy weather was making trouble or us all the time. Finally we
finished cleaning up my dormitory till afternoon.
But there was still one thing that was very important. So we went to
bank even though we were very hungry, but it was so bad that the bank
was full o people. Then we spent the whole afternoon in bank.
At the end, I just wanted to say:” Oh my goodness! We made it
eventually.”
What a hurry day!
I think it’s hard for me to capture the moment when I came to my
college firstly. It gave me a complex feeling, but it was really a
hurry day.
My father and I went up at six o’clock in the morning, and then we got
to college at seven o’clock. There were so many people when we arrived
there and there were so many things we should do.
It was lucky that we got the help o two kind girls, at the same time
rainy weather was making trouble or us all the time. Finally we
finished cleaning up my dormitory till afternoon.
But there was still one thing that was very important. So we went to
bank even though we were very hungry, but it was so bad that the bank
was full o people. Then we spent the whole afternoon in bank.
At the end, I just wanted to say:” Oh my goodness! We made it
eventually.”
What a hurry day!
chongchong
Oct 12, 2009, 9:01:55 AM10/12/09
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My Favorite Film
Perhaps every girl has her own princess dream, where she would live in
the palace of dreams and flowers, wearing beautiful dresses and being
in love with her Prince Charming.
Being a fairy-tale the film Barbie As The 12 Dancing Princesses,
Princesses of this story who have great passion for dancing. They
can’t do without dancing, as for them, dancing is life and life is
dancing .Although the Emperor is deeply attached to his daughters, he
is vexed about his daughters who do not know how to behave themselves.
For the sake of his daughters, The Emperor begs Duchess Rowena to
instruct his daughters in princess lessons. As a rule, in a romantic
story there will always be an evil person to stand at the opposite
side of moral spectrum, standing sharp contract against the hero or
heroine, Duchess Rowena, serves as this role, she attempts to murder
the Emperor, imprisons his princesses and takes over the throne.
Fortunately, the Empress left 12 books which opened a secret passage,
leading girls to a fairly marvellous world when she expired, and she
left dances for clues. The wonderful world, where achieve your dancing
dreams and put away your annoyance, is limited to three visits and
then it will be closed forever. They’re originally reveling in this
marvellous world. The fact that they return and rescue their father
and country bravely . In the face of the challengers of country
crisis, 12 daughters use their agile mind successfully.
Barbie As The 12 Dancing Princesses is one of my favorite movie. In
the first place, the plot is well-structured and the language is easy
to pick up. Felix Mendelssohn composed the music for this movie and
The New York City Ballet did the choreography .Though this is just a
simple little story and the plot is predictable, its beautiful music
and splendid dances are very impressive. The beautiful music and
scenes is a great treat to both my eyes and ears. Briefly speaking,
watching this film is relaxing experience both mentally and
physically.
Besides, different films express different ideas. And this film mainly
conveys the family moral force and family power. Once we win the
support of our families, we would have the motive force to go forward
and win the battle. A typical example for me is that I would fall onto
the floor from jungle gym without family encouragement. Moreover, the
unity and cooperation among family members have helped to safeguard
our interests. The warmth and power surrounds you when you get a
considerate expression or a greeting from family. Like 12 Princesses
and the Emperor, they misunderstand each other and compelled to
depart. However, they try to help each other rather than neglect each
other. It shows absolutely trust and respect and presents “love”.
What’s more, it is our responsibility to shelter our family members
from attraction and danger.
The last but not the least, this film also tell us this time of
adversity offers a unique moment of opportunity .A moment we must
seize to change our awkward situation. Meanwhile, connected your
intelligence and strong points, you can achieve twice the result with
half the effort. I know: We can overcome evil with greater good.
As has been said that this film not only shows a joyous visual impact
for me but also brings out the importance of emotional attachment
among family members .In addition, it teaches me how to seize the
opportunity in bad situation.
I hold that the small films always imply the profound insights of
life.
Perhaps every girl has her own princess dream, where she would live in
the palace of dreams and flowers, wearing beautiful dresses and being
in love with her Prince Charming.
Being a fairy-tale the film Barbie As The 12 Dancing Princesses,
Princesses of this story who have great passion for dancing. They
can’t do without dancing, as for them, dancing is life and life is
dancing .Although the Emperor is deeply attached to his daughters, he
is vexed about his daughters who do not know how to behave themselves.
For the sake of his daughters, The Emperor begs Duchess Rowena to
instruct his daughters in princess lessons. As a rule, in a romantic
story there will always be an evil person to stand at the opposite
side of moral spectrum, standing sharp contract against the hero or
heroine, Duchess Rowena, serves as this role, she attempts to murder
the Emperor, imprisons his princesses and takes over the throne.
Fortunately, the Empress left 12 books which opened a secret passage,
leading girls to a fairly marvellous world when she expired, and she
left dances for clues. The wonderful world, where achieve your dancing
dreams and put away your annoyance, is limited to three visits and
then it will be closed forever. They’re originally reveling in this
marvellous world. The fact that they return and rescue their father
and country bravely . In the face of the challengers of country
crisis, 12 daughters use their agile mind successfully.
Barbie As The 12 Dancing Princesses is one of my favorite movie. In
the first place, the plot is well-structured and the language is easy
to pick up. Felix Mendelssohn composed the music for this movie and
The New York City Ballet did the choreography .Though this is just a
simple little story and the plot is predictable, its beautiful music
and splendid dances are very impressive. The beautiful music and
scenes is a great treat to both my eyes and ears. Briefly speaking,
watching this film is relaxing experience both mentally and
physically.
Besides, different films express different ideas. And this film mainly
conveys the family moral force and family power. Once we win the
support of our families, we would have the motive force to go forward
and win the battle. A typical example for me is that I would fall onto
the floor from jungle gym without family encouragement. Moreover, the
unity and cooperation among family members have helped to safeguard
our interests. The warmth and power surrounds you when you get a
considerate expression or a greeting from family. Like 12 Princesses
and the Emperor, they misunderstand each other and compelled to
depart. However, they try to help each other rather than neglect each
other. It shows absolutely trust and respect and presents “love”.
What’s more, it is our responsibility to shelter our family members
from attraction and danger.
The last but not the least, this film also tell us this time of
adversity offers a unique moment of opportunity .A moment we must
seize to change our awkward situation. Meanwhile, connected your
intelligence and strong points, you can achieve twice the result with
half the effort. I know: We can overcome evil with greater good.
As has been said that this film not only shows a joyous visual impact
for me but also brings out the importance of emotional attachment
among family members .In addition, it teaches me how to seize the
opportunity in bad situation.
I hold that the small films always imply the profound insights of
life.
chongchong
Oct 12, 2009, 9:03:49 AM10/12/09
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My first day in the university
It was my first day to begin my life at the northwest normal
university. My parents went to the university with me. At that day, I
got up early and prepared packages well. At the same time, I felt a
little nervous because I 'm not sure I can get along with my
classmates.
When we arrived at this university, there were already hundreds of
people gathering. Juniors gave me some instructions of how to
register.
After finished registration, I went to dormitory, meet my roommates
and communicate with each other. They all looked friendly and warm
hearted. I hope I will have a happy time at university. Finally, it is
time to say goodbye to my parents. And it is necessary that I plan my
life by myself and learn some manners to deal with difficulties. I
believe the tomorrow would be better.
It was my first day to begin my life at the northwest normal
university. My parents went to the university with me. At that day, I
got up early and prepared packages well. At the same time, I felt a
little nervous because I 'm not sure I can get along with my
classmates.
When we arrived at this university, there were already hundreds of
people gathering. Juniors gave me some instructions of how to
register.
After finished registration, I went to dormitory, meet my roommates
and communicate with each other. They all looked friendly and warm
hearted. I hope I will have a happy time at university. Finally, it is
time to say goodbye to my parents. And it is necessary that I plan my
life by myself and learn some manners to deal with difficulties. I
believe the tomorrow would be better.
chongchong
Oct 12, 2009, 9:05:40 AM10/12/09
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An Unforgettable Experience
Last week, I’m honor to be a young volunteer served as Pakistan .
Learning this news , we began to make preparations for the activity.
With the help of the internet, I searched some information about
Pakistan by the internet.
The following day, we were demanded to pick up the guests from
Pakistan.Finally I was tasked to receive three Pakistan, two men and a
beautiful woman, under a little nervous and pressure. I introduced
myself in brief .Actually my mind went completely blank in spite of
making fully preparations.I had to use my words to express my ideas
with helpless.
First we went to a Muslim family and they were warmly received us.
According to have a talk with this family, I learned some traditions
about Muslim. I gave a translation each other, looking at our friends’
conversation going well, just relaxed, and gained some confidence.
Then they told me they wanted to buy presents for their friends and
relatives. I found my former preparations were useless again. After
much hard bargaining we reached an agreement .I realized it is my
first time to bargain in English. I was much delighted my words were
easily understood and made a conversation clearly to each other.
It was a memorable experience for me
Last week, I’m honor to be a young volunteer served as Pakistan .
Learning this news , we began to make preparations for the activity.
With the help of the internet, I searched some information about
Pakistan by the internet.
The following day, we were demanded to pick up the guests from
Pakistan.Finally I was tasked to receive three Pakistan, two men and a
beautiful woman, under a little nervous and pressure. I introduced
myself in brief .Actually my mind went completely blank in spite of
making fully preparations.I had to use my words to express my ideas
with helpless.
First we went to a Muslim family and they were warmly received us.
According to have a talk with this family, I learned some traditions
about Muslim. I gave a translation each other, looking at our friends’
conversation going well, just relaxed, and gained some confidence.
Then they told me they wanted to buy presents for their friends and
relatives. I found my former preparations were useless again. After
much hard bargaining we reached an agreement .I realized it is my
first time to bargain in English. I was much delighted my words were
easily understood and made a conversation clearly to each other.
It was a memorable experience for me
linda
Oct 14, 2009, 11:55:43 AM10/14/09
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The vocabularies used to describe the appearance of person:
beautiful curly versatile thin brown chubby broad-shouldered
casually-dressed modest short handsome reddish
bony cropped lovely cheerful wavy sensitive
pretty
snub blonde braided good-looking straight parted plain
slanting bad-tempered intelligent pony tail big pale
stout
short-sighted heart-shaped coloured sharp fashionable
quiet
wel-built slim simple slender plump fair tasteful lean
tall
medium-height pionted flat round grey smart dark blue
friendly black sociable rosy self-centered
vain
beautiful curly versatile thin brown chubby broad-shouldered
casually-dressed modest short handsome reddish
bony cropped lovely cheerful wavy sensitive
pretty
snub blonde braided good-looking straight parted plain
slanting bad-tempered intelligent pony tail big pale
stout
short-sighted heart-shaped coloured sharp fashionable
quiet
wel-built slim simple slender plump fair tasteful lean
tall
medium-height pionted flat round grey smart dark blue
friendly black sociable rosy self-centered
vain
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