I completely agree with jillia's well written review. I agree with jillia when she states that she was quite horrified with the history of the first frozen potato fry, but I also want to say that there isn't any product that came to fame the easy way. With the American life getting busier everyday, fast food joints are becoming overly popular with quick, unhealthy and low budget meals. I think that the process of freezing fatty and oily foods should be addressed and abolished before further damage to the American life style can be accomplished.
Eric Schlosser's article, "why the fries taste good", was a well written article. The evolution of the fry had a large impact on American society and strongly influenced how we prepared frozen foods. This article uses many ways to explain the history of American fries, and how they changed one man's dream into a countrywide sensation. Fries have a long and complicated history of perseverance that I strongly respect. Although frozen foods were first seen as revolutionary, I think that they were misused and have become a major problem for childhood obesity. In this article, the author constantly explained how farmers would exchange farm equipment through a simple handshake or flip of a coin. This was very surprising because of the technological advancements that had occurred by this time. Farms have become not a source of potatoes or animals, but have become just a source of mass produced food. I think that the author spent a lot of time describing the process of farming potatoes because he wants the reader to become aware of the endurance required to farm and distribute the spuds. He also wants to express what changes and process the food goes through before it even reaches our table to be eaten. Food has become so processed and full of fats and oils, that we can barely recognize the original flavor of the potato. I think the major rhetorical purpose of Schlosser’s statement was ethos and logos, in that if they are eating the frozen spuds then you eat them too. The new influx of technology has strongly influenced the way products are advertised and marketed to the public. I think that fast food and frozen dinners are a major problem in today’s society. I also think it should be addressed before further damage to the American life style can be accomplished.
Every thing i read surprised me. I find all of this facinating, how they started, how they make the fries, and how far they have come since the company started. I think he took so long to describe because he wants us to appreciate the company as much as he does, and also how the food is made and what it takes to make the food. I agree with Jillia about how irony is used because of how he still eats all the food he makes. I think that it would be hard to eat the food your factories are making sicne you do know what chemical you put into it.
Everything in Eric Schlosser’s article, Why the Fries Taste Good, shocked me. I mean skinning the horses and feeding the meat to the hogs is pretty nasty but I have to agree with Cole, it was a smart business move. I mean you gotta do what you gotta do to live. What is even more surprising is that he drops out of middle school and didn’t even attend high school or college but still made money, so much that he became a multimillionaire. I believe that he took so long to describe it so we can understand and admire the company of making potatoes.
I think that Eric’s statement at the end was the rhetorical use of ethos and pathos because the French fries taste good even though he knows what has been done to them he still eats them. The good things are bad for you but people don’t care, as long as it is good and fills them up. They’re all good.
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I was very surprised and quite horrified that he killed and skinned wild horses to sell their hides and feed their meat to his hogs, which he got for $1 and ended up selling them for $12.50. I also found it interesting that after he became a potato famer that he had to settle an arguement over an electric potato sorter with a coin toss. I also found it interesting that Simplot was an eigth grade drop out and ended up being one of the richest men in the US. Another surprising thing was that most food that is artifically flavored tastes like the food because of the aroma that it lets off. I also thought that the fact that there isn't much of a difference between natural and artificial flavors was interesting. I think that he took so much time describe the process of farming potatoes and the flavor labs beacuse it is important to understand where are food comes from and how it is made. Also, he wants the reader to know that most food isn't real but flavored with various chemicals. He is using irony to show that even though he knows the process of making french fries he will still eat them because they are good and it is what the general public is doing.
It suprised me that Simplot was so smart seling his items for more than he bought them. He dropped out of school at such a young age and then worked his way up earning more and more money. Determining the outcome of the potato sorter by the flip of a coin seems very unprofessional. simplot seems to be an opportunist and sells whatever is needed at the time. He took so much time explaining the process to let the reader know exactly what happens. I think that pathos is the rhetorical appeal used because it makes you feel like the fries are the best of their kind.
I agree with Caroline in the fact that they want you to apreciate it as much as he does.
This article surprised me at the very end when it says that the fries were delicious and he wanted more. It actually made me chuckle because I had read a HUGE article about just to hear the author say that. It seems as if Schlosser is trying to get the reader to understand how ignorant we are when it comes to the foods we put in our mouth. I think the ending portrays the typical American attitude about food: "I don't care where it came from. Does it taste good?" The story also shows that success does not necessarily require an education. Success can sometimes be a result of a gambling mind and a determined soul. I think Schlosser took all that time to describe the farming of potatoes and the "flavor labs" to show that what we eat these days is not authentic. The majority of people do not care about where their food came from. The exception is the vegetarians, who are actually quite rare in my environment. But then again, I do live in the south. Anyways, the rhetorical purpose is irony. For crying out loud, the man took about 22 pages to describe where the fries/potatoes came from and then he ends it by asking for more. It is definitely dramatic irony because at about page 7, I was wondering where he was going with this. The last paragraph was the only meaningful part in the whole story.
Jillia, I was not surprised at all at Simplot's decision of the capture/murder of the horses because he benefited financially. Simplot seems like a man who would do anything for money. A murder of a horse probably did not cause him to lose a wink of sleep. I did not find it surprising that he turned around and sold those hogs for about 12 times the amount that he bought them for. If we knew what the actual cost of our clothes were, not the price that the store decides, but the amount of money that it costs to make the clothes, we would probably freak out. It is sick that us customers have to face the wrath of the result of entrepreneurs’ greed. Whew! Now that I have finished my rant about inflated prices, I will move on. I agree that the aroma influences the taste is very interesting. I mean, burgers smell SO GOOD, but really I could be eating a horse (sorry to all you horse lovers #Jinah). I agree with all of your other points. Well done, Jillia.
Eric Schlosser's article, "why the fries taste good", was a well written article. The evolution of the fry had a large impact on American society and strongly influenced how we prepared frozen foods. This article uses many ways to explain the history of American fries, and how they changed one man's dream into a countrywide sensation. Fries have a long and complicated history of perseverance that I strongly respect. Although frozen foods were first seen as revolutionary, I think that they were misused and have become a major problem for childhood obesity. In this article, the author constantly explained how farmers would exchange farm equipment through a simple handshake or flip of a coin. This was very surprising because of the technological advancements that had occurred by this time. Farms have become not a source of potatoes or animals, but have become just a source of mass produced food. I think that the author spent a lot of time describing the process of farming potatoes because he wants the reader to become aware of the endurance required to farm and distribute the spuds. He also wants to express what changes and process the food goes through before it even reaches our table to be eaten. Food has become so processed and full of fats and oils, that we can barely recognize the original flavor of the potato. I think the major rhetorical purpose of Schlosser’s statement was ethos and logos, in that if they are eating the frozen spuds then you eat them too. The new influx of technology has strongly influenced the way products are advertised and marketed to the public. I think that fast food and frozen dinners are a major problem in today’s society. I also think it should be addressed before further damage to the American life style can be accomplished.