Julius Caesar Essay
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Zachary Wallace
Mar 4, 2012, 11:11:41 PM3/4/12
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Zach Wallace
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Thesis: In the Tragedy of Julius Caesar, manipulation is used for
control and power is used for evil.(Group Thesis)
TS1: Pg. 15-21 Cassius convinces Brutus to get involved in the
conspiracy(ZW)
TS2: Pg. 71 Decius manipulates Caesar by mocking him and questioning
his manhood(ZW)
TS3: Pg. 33 Cassius throws letters in Brutus’ window about the
conspiracy to kill Caesar(ZW)
Emmanuel R.
Mar 4, 2012, 11:47:07 PM3/4/12
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I see what your trying to get at but when your gonna manipulate
somebody your trying to control them. aren't you? also the last topic
sentence doesn't exactly go with the other two but i like it better
that way. you could change the other two to make it more like the last
one.
somebody your trying to control them. aren't you? also the last topic
sentence doesn't exactly go with the other two but i like it better
that way. you could change the other two to make it more like the last
one.
william hecht
Mar 5, 2012, 9:45:55 PM3/5/12
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CD's look good for the thesis.
Ryan Kranson
Mar 5, 2012, 10:31:22 PM3/5/12
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good point with the thesis, i think you guys can reword it to make it
flow better
flow better
Michael Marymee
Mar 6, 2012, 12:00:39 AM3/6/12
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The thesis needs work, but you had good CD's
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Mikey Greaney
Mar 6, 2012, 12:18:02 AM3/6/12
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John Doyle
Mar 6, 2012, 12:20:33 AM3/6/12
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Good CD thesis needs work
Zachary Wallace
Mar 6, 2012, 1:04:55 AM3/6/12
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"Yond Cassius has a lean and hungry look; He thinks too much: such men
are dangerous" Julius Quote (Act I, Scene II).
"As he was valiant, I honour him; but, as he was ambitious, I slew
him" . Quote (Act III, Sc. II).
"Cowards die many times before their deaths; The valiant never taste
of death but once.
Of all the wonders that I yet have heard, it seems to me most strange
that men should fear;
Seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come".
Julius Caesar Quote (Act II, Scene II).
are dangerous" Julius Quote (Act I, Scene II).
"As he was valiant, I honour him; but, as he was ambitious, I slew
him" . Quote (Act III, Sc. II).
"Cowards die many times before their deaths; The valiant never taste
of death but once.
Of all the wonders that I yet have heard, it seems to me most strange
that men should fear;
Seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come".
Julius Caesar Quote (Act II, Scene II).
On Mar 4, 8:11 pm, Zachary Wallace <zachar...@gmail.com> wrote:
Dan Galbraith
Mar 6, 2012, 5:52:24 PM3/6/12
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Add lead-ins and CM to explain how the control and power is used for
evil and what does it accomplish. Use some explanation in your thesis.
Good work otherwise.
evil and what does it accomplish. Use some explanation in your thesis.
Good work otherwise.
grady nelson
Mar 6, 2012, 6:36:59 PM3/6/12
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Your thesis a little seems redundant
Christian Casias
Mar 6, 2012, 7:54:38 PM3/6/12
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The thesis could use some re-working or wording....good job
though...Your CD's are good... Try Using some explanation when you
rework your thesis.
Good work otherwise.
cade Bailey
Mar 6, 2012, 7:58:37 PM3/6/12
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There is a lot you could add on and there isn't much on the thesis.
Nick Espejo
Mar 6, 2012, 8:49:28 PM3/6/12
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good CD's
Charlie Maloney
Mar 6, 2012, 9:09:49 PM3/6/12
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In the thesis, I don't think it is completely accurate. Not all
manipulation is used for control and not all power is used for evil
i.e Brutus and Antony.
manipulation is used for control and not all power is used for evil
i.e Brutus and Antony.
Marquis Morris
Mar 7, 2012, 12:05:32 AM3/7/12
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Just a small thing, put a comma after control. Its easy to have a run
of words.
of words.
Marcelo Orozco
Mar 7, 2012, 12:22:45 AM3/7/12
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Good concrete details but the thesis is a little a weak
David Pinon
Mar 7, 2012, 12:32:59 AM3/7/12
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Thesis can use a little more detail but I get what your going at with it.
Joshua Salem
Mar 7, 2012, 1:20:23 PM3/7/12
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The thesis is redundant but it seems like you have ok concrete
details.
details.
zach haynes
Mar 8, 2012, 11:45:37 PM3/8/12
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Kind of a broad thesis but I see where you going. Just make sure to be
more specific with the thesis
more specific with the thesis
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