this is radically improved! wow. my only complaints would be:
- skip the "no one knows you're a dog", very obscure reference that many people will...tilt their heads at
- way too many music changes
- 4-6 of the music choices are wildly inappropriate, like way to energetic
but the overall narrative flow is phenomenal, and the imagery generally matches it well. at some point i'd still love a professional polished video, possibly animated, but this is amazing for a very cheap get-off-the-ground solution.
i can share it on social media but i might wait to see if you end up incorporating any feedback from us.
clay