[Dan Ho]

Hey Team,
 
Hope everyone has been having a great weekend.
 
Attached to this email is the draft copy of my work on Question 1. It is only a draft and there will be a lot of changes conducted along the way.
 
I still need to reference and paraphrase some of the paragraphs as well as including a closing argument. In addition I plan to organise a better diagram to illustrate the argument.
 
Also I acknowlege that my answer for part b is quiet weak so i'll be working on that as well throughout the week.
 
Please do not hesitate to let me know if I have missed anything or you would like to see something included or removed.
 
Don't be shy. I look forward to your feedback.