Global warming

[marina...@gmail.com]

Sorry guys I still haven't finished this is what I have so far, not quite how I want it, but it's all I have.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ueUxfXEq2PvOMnV_1Lmy8RywQSaue1bZ0eIeSJZPlFw/edit?usp=sharing

[Mary KING]

Good start to your essay. Your opening paragraph is clear on the topic and gives a hint of how your essay will be done. which is exactly how Scott wants it. In terms of your 2nd paragraph you have a lot of good information. But just remember that you have to use information or "quotes" rather from notable sources. One site I have used to help me find information on the effects of global warming is IPCC.com . if you look on the "summary for policy makers" it has a lot of information. Dont be scared when you see its over 100 pages, just scroll down and you will see text that is highlighted in yellow that summarize the information in the report which is very reliable. But besides that, your essay is good and i think you have grasped what you need to talk about. Just remember its research paper so you cant just say the facts, you must prove the information by incorporating where you got the information from. 

[Cindy Garcia]

Good start. I know you have not finished yet, so you will have to add more to it and hopefully will find everything you need to complete your thoughts on this topic.