ingrid research

[ingrid mayorga]

here is my paper is not finish yet I am at work and I being working everyday .....I hope you guys can opened. sorry about that I am super bussy.

[yasaminm...@gmail.com]

This was a good start! I like the direction that you are taking with this. A suggestion I have though is to make sure you are quoting things with the name of the author or organization that wrote it. So if I was quoting something from NASA, at the end of the quote it has to be like (NASA). Also make sure to get a thesis statement in your introduction. Your paragraphs are definitely focused on one subject which is good! If it helps you, I used the paper that Scott gave us that showed how to format each paragraph and what to write about in each.