Very Rough Draft, Global Warming, did I mention this is a rough draft.

[Justin Miller]

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I like how Justin's essay is based on research, and it's really easy to understand. I know it's a rough draft, but it would be much better if he fixes his format of the essay. I feel like since it's based on research it's really detail, which helps reader to understand faster, and he also wrote his thoughts in the essay which was same thoughts that I was thinking of. It shows seriousness of global warming, and important information that are helpful for other people. I really liked Justin's essay and I think it would be much better if he fixes the format and make it more simple.