I turned in the new version of the essay to Mr.Warfe to be graded, however, in order for him to grade it every member of the group needs to submit a 300 word response as to what they learned to not do when writing an essay. I understand that none of you have any ideas as to what the new essay looks like, but if you could look it over and compare it to our original copy you would have something to write about in the 30-word response. Basically, all the things I didn't include in the final essay from our original essay are the things "we" learned not to do when writing an essay. Here is the link to the new version of the essay:
Alos, does anyone know if Amanda is still in our group???