Rough Draft for Angela Dorsey

[Angela Dorsey]

I took what I thought about global warming personally, and I will start to research what my thoughts are and put it in my final paper.

Global Warming

In a world full of mystery, “ How valid is this situation in our lives.   Global Warming is a situation that exist because of neglect and misunderstandings of our responsibility to mother nature.  No matter how you view the outcome or lack there of, as a nation we owe it to our past, present and future to figure it out.

There are several options to consider when thinking about the rationale behind Global Warming. Do you agree with the scientist that this is something that requires our utmost attention? or Do you agree that this is hoax like the the sea monkeys?  We must pick a side to rally for a future or decide that there are tangible situations that require a now fixing.

My focus is to figure out what economical impact this will have the world, if its a hoax.  I also want to focus on the aspect of Global Warming its occurring now, and what is being done to prevent it. Choosing aside is like a crap shoot.  We have to take stand at some point to decide if this is real.

I would say that I am in favor of repairing the neglect we have inflicted on this great planet.  I know that there are outcomes that will decide our fate, but I on the side of fixing, and preparing. I have son that I want to have a future, that motivation enough for me.

[Zarina Jaeger]

I do understand that you were not able to get to the research portion of the essay and I very much appreciated personally that you still took the time to write something for the group to reply to rather than nothing, so for that I thank you. I think that you just thinking of some questions and your own personal thoughts on the topic of Global Warming may be extremely helpful towards you when you do get the chance to start and finish the rough draft. I think it is very good that you use your son and his future to motivate you in ways on thinking about the inaction vs action and the myth vs fact. I can't wait to see your rough draft!

[郑若蔓]

You have clear thinking and the word you used is also interesting, but the article is very short, and there is no specific information to support on your point of view, but I think it is ok because it is a rough draft so when you finish the other paragraphs of the article it will be better. Your evaluation is very objective and you are able to objectively explain the positive and negative of various situations. The point of view you explain is also quite clear and your article structure is also good. That is what I see from your article…

[Jocelyn Crowell]

Thank you for posting your rough draft. It is hard to find information on the different scenarios of global warming so good luck. The economy is a good topic that should have a lot of information I hope it goes well for you. Remember to stay objective and not show that you are biased toward global warming because we have to remain objective throughout the entire paper. I wish you good luck with the paper because it did prove to be difficult for me and time consuming. I hope that we are allowed to ask him more questions on Tuesday.

[Angela Dorsey]

Thanks guys.  I will gather my thoughts by tuesday....