Bullet Background Paper

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Freshmen

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Apr 11, 2011, 11:31:14 AM4/11/11
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Drill Dogs,

A few of you need to turn in your BBP's. It is worth 10% of your final
grade. Do the math. The following cadets need to turn these in by COB
13 Wed into the WG/CC box:

Barry
Carter
Dayhuff
Gardner
Mortimer
Nelson
Quinlon
Recanzone
Smith
Welborn


Have a good day and good luck on finals.

The Deputy

Jared Erekson

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Apr 12, 2011, 5:09:19 PM4/12/11
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Fellow cadets, here is my bullet background paper for you to look at to compare the formatting if you have not already turned yours in.
 
Things to remember:
Ensure that the first hyphen of a sub-point in inline with the first letter of the line above
 
All bullets should be a single dash (-)
 
Should end with

C/ 4C Erekson/AFROTC/Det 855/(443)848-3836/jse/23 Mar 11

but with your information.

If you need more help contact your teammates or google bullet background paper examples. I found many good examples there.

 
Best of luck,
C/ 4C Erekson
BULLET BACKGROUND PAPER-2- art of war.docx

Brittany and Clayton Drown

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Apr 12, 2011, 5:44:30 PM4/12/11
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Not all bullets are a single dash.  All of your main points are single dashes.  Sub-points are two dashes and sub-points of the sub-points (aren't used often) are three dashes.

There should be more than one main points.

For example if I read Harry Potter, I might have the following main points

1  He is a wizard
2  His friends are important to his success
3  His enemy is Voldermort

my sub-points might be:
sub 1  he displayed magical powers from an early age
sub 2  Hermoine and Ron helped him defeat Prof. Squirrel
sub 3  Voldermort killed his parents

a sub-sub-point might be
sub-sub 1  he made glass disappear at the zoo

Follow the example found in the tongue and quill

I hope that this helps.

Sheriff

Brittany and Clayton Drown

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Apr 12, 2011, 5:49:30 PM4/12/11
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Also, don't repeat your main point in your first sub-point.  This isn't an outline for a paper that you're going to write.  It is a one-page document that touches upon all of the main points of a much larger document.  I don't have time to read all of the books that you read.  The purpose of you writing the BBP is to give me a summary of the highlights so I can get what the article or book was talking about without having to read it.  Write your BBP with that in mind.

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