Rise Of The Anomalous
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Jay-Alonzo
Feb 9, 2008, 11:15:55 PM2/9/08
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Story: Rise Of The Anomalous
Author:Jay Alonzo
Rating: M
Summary: After a 2nd Depression, 2030 America is on the brink of civil
war until a boy reveals he can fly and renews the hope of an era. ROTA
is a story told through the perspectives of various characters in
different social classes as a vigilante wreaks havoc on the flawed
system.
Chapters:3; Reviews: 5 (3 of which are from the same person, bless
her.)
If anyone out there can help me, I am an aspiring writer and seriously
trying to hone my craft, this manuscript is completed and I release
one chapter every Saturday night. Most chapters range from 12-20 pages
(except for the prologue for course) and it is M for a reason. I just
want to know if it's good or not. Most people are dissauded by the
length of the chapters, but it's an easy read. And I'm not writing to
impress critics, I'm writing to entertain and audience, so let me know
if I entertained you. Thank you.
-J
Author:Jay Alonzo
Rating: M
Summary: After a 2nd Depression, 2030 America is on the brink of civil
war until a boy reveals he can fly and renews the hope of an era. ROTA
is a story told through the perspectives of various characters in
different social classes as a vigilante wreaks havoc on the flawed
system.
Chapters:3; Reviews: 5 (3 of which are from the same person, bless
her.)
If anyone out there can help me, I am an aspiring writer and seriously
trying to hone my craft, this manuscript is completed and I release
one chapter every Saturday night. Most chapters range from 12-20 pages
(except for the prologue for course) and it is M for a reason. I just
want to know if it's good or not. Most people are dissauded by the
length of the chapters, but it's an easy read. And I'm not writing to
impress critics, I'm writing to entertain and audience, so let me know
if I entertained you. Thank you.
-J
Jay-Alonzo
Feb 10, 2008, 1:46:48 AM2/10/08
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God I'm an idiot:
http://www.fictionpress.com/~jayalonzo
that's my profile page, I only have the single story up so check it
out if you get the chance, thanks for your time and allowing me in the
group.
-J
http://www.fictionpress.com/~jayalonzo
that's my profile page, I only have the single story up so check it
out if you get the chance, thanks for your time and allowing me in the
group.
-J
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