Re: Re: callous road widening on main rd of nfc

[ajay mahajan]

dear padma and anjana

thanks..
have had network issues... my laptop isnt connected still....

i cant open the doc with the changes on my destkop. its probably a new windows version like windows 7.

will try on the laptop...

hv also done a letter for the forest/tree officers, regarding the trees.. 
will mail that soon as my network happens on laptop or earlr if  i can..

ajay

On Wed, Jun 30, 2010 at 9:17 AM, padmavati dwivedi <padm...@rediffmail.com> wrote:

Namaste!

Made some changes to the letter.

I find it well researched letter however just reduced the length and tried to categorize the concern areas.

Hope it helps.

Rgds,

PadmavatI Dwivedi
Compassionate Living

On Tue, 29 Jun 2010 19:18:44 +0530 wrote

>with a lil addition
attached again..

ajay

On Tue, Jun 29, 2010 at 5:54 PM, ajay mahajan wrote:


dear anjana, padma, govind, jaya and all
thisz abt drastic reduction of pavements  and road widening on main rd of new friends colony
landing trees on the road, along with pedestrians...

pl read the attachment... 

i really need your help to figure what to do and do itcant do a campaign alone or such like alone...!

anjana, thanks for the wonderful job  with the edit. did some final additions n improvisations. 


its attached with the mail...
Just one questn, the 1 and 3/4 pages length is long, no...?
Do u think its possible to somehow reduce it witht compromising on any imp aspects....

think theyre most likely to be some repeats or longwinded sentences.
only it'll mean some more time.... suggestns and help please.....  
also theyve speeded up the work


love
ajay