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Re: How to write a story about a cannibalistic robot?

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ju...@pascal.org

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Feb 25, 2009, 11:22:41 PM2/25/09
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On Feb 25, 7:33 pm, "Xenon" <Xe...@Xenon.Xenon> wrote:
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> I want to write a story about a robot that will eat its creator and
> numerous humans.
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> What do I need for such a story and will it be believable?

In order to be believable cannibalism, wouldn't the robot need to eat
robots?

OTOH, if this was a class exercise my story about the human eating
robot would require that the robot was designed to clean up biological
waste... and gets confused... and has a mouth... although if it didn't
have a mouth and only scrubbers or a straw or something, the
creativity necessary to actually consume a human might lend an
interesting twist.

Not my sort of thing, though, so if any of that is helpful, go for it.

-Julie

Zeborah

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Feb 26, 2009, 12:00:45 AM2/26/09
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Xenon <Xe...@Xenon.Xenon> wrote:

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> I want to write a story about a robot that will eat its creator and
> numerous humans.
>
> What do I need for such a story

Words.

>and will it be believable?

Depends on the words.

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James A. Donald

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Feb 26, 2009, 4:46:27 PM2/26/09
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On Thu, 26 Feb 2009 03:33:09 +0100, "Xenon" <Xe...@Xenon.Xenon> wrote:
> I want to write a story about a robot that will eat its creator and
> numerous humans.

No no, not a robot - robots are metal, and naturally subservient.

Of course he could be a war robot, and then his IFF goes wonki.

But generaly, you want something somewhat organic, so that he can
actually gain nutrients by eating people: For example some kind of
nanotech biotech that reanimates supersoldiers built from the corpses
of normal soldiers.

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Jonathan L Cunningham

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Feb 26, 2009, 7:28:20 PM2/26/09
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On Thu, 26 Feb 2009 03:33:09 +0100, "Xenon" <Xe...@Xenon.Xenon> wrote:

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>I want to write a story about a robot that will eat its creator and
>numerous humans.
>

>What do I need for such a story and will it be believable?

What you need:

(1) A robot
(2) The robot's creator
(3) A bunch of other people

Will it be believable?

(1) Probably not
(2) Depends who writes the story
(3) If I wrote it, yes, entirely believable.
(4) If you wrote it: well, that depends, doesn't it? You never said you
wanted to write a believable story, and I suspect you aren't even
interested in writing any story. There are better cures for boredom than
you are trying. Do you need suggestions?

Jonathan

Gerry Quinn

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Feb 26, 2009, 10:16:32 PM2/26/09
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In article <go4um7$sl5$1...@aioe.org>, Xe...@Xenon.Xenon says...

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> I want to write a story about a robot that will eat its creator and
> numerous humans.
>
> What do I need for such a story and will it be believable?

A motive. "Kill All Humans" should suffice.

- Gerry Quinn

J.J. O'Shea

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Feb 26, 2009, 10:56:29 PM2/26/09
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On Thu, 26 Feb 2009 22:16:32 -0500, Gerry Quinn wrote
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You are Red Robot and I claim my $5.

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Jon Schild

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Mar 7, 2009, 2:01:27 PM3/7/09
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Yes, it would have to. A robot that eats humans is a carnivor, not a
cannibal.

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