Draft letter from Edgar

[Robin Lindsley]

Another missive from Edgar in California! We talked about doing a letter to the editor- here's his draft. Needs some work, anyone got time...?
RSVP Thanks!

[Walter Wentz]

Some suggested changes marked in red.

WW

Are you still looking for exciting things to do this summer? Well, Dairy Creek Community Food Web  has just the event for you and your readers! This summer, on [FYY TOUR DATE/TIME], Dairy Creek Community Food Web will once again host its annual Farm Your Yard Kitchen Garden Tours! This year, we will be having discount coupons at each garden for [LIST LOCAL STORES OFFERING COUPONS], bluegrass jams at select gardens, and food. You get an evening full of amazing local gardens, laid-back music, and priceless garden insight from our wonderful gardeners, all for the cost of just $15 a ticket! 

Or, if you haven’t the time or confidence to make your own garden, shy not just attend this event and enjoy the feeling of accomplishment for somebody else’s? 

We hope to see you there!

DCCFW.

For tickets, contact: 

Website:

On May 30, 2017, at 9:37 AM, Robin Lindsley wrote:

Another missive from Edgar in California! We talked about doing a letter to the editor- here's his draft. Needs some work, anyone got time...?
RSVP  Thanks!

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[Robin Lindsley]

Thanks Walter, we're honored to have your help! 🤗 

Robin 

Working for the Common Good 

On May 30, 2017, at 7:00 PM, Walter Wentz <wa...@teleport.com> wrote:

Some suggested changes marked in red.

WW

Are you still looking for exciting things to do this summer? Well, Dairy Creek Community Food Web  has just the event for you and your readers! This summer, on [FYY TOUR DATE/TIME], Dairy Creek Community Food Web will once again host its annual Farm Your Yard Kitchen Garden Tours! This year, we will be having discount coupons at each garden for [LIST LOCAL STORES OFFERING COUPONS], bluegrass jams at select gardens, and food. You get an evening full of amazing local gardens, laid-back music, and priceless garden insight from our wonderful gardeners, all for the cost of just $15 a ticket! 

Or, if you haven’t the time or confidence to make your own garden, why not just attend this event and enjoy the feeling of accomplishment for somebody else’s?