AIAA Paper rev 02
Jake Niece
list). A few items:
I didn't write a conclusion. It is not required but recommended. This
is what the AIAA has to say about conclusions: "Although a conclusion
may review the main points of the paper, do not replicate the abstract
as the conclusion. A conclusion might elaborate on the importance of
the work or suggest applications and extensions." If someone feels
strongly about it, then you can write one and I'll put it in.
Do we want to include any appendix items?
I am going to try to include a testing section by cutting down the IR2
testing document.
Note to self: Retake pictures of grommet-mylar interface, & full beam.
what is the technical name for our clear mylar, and what are some
specs on it. jay has not responded to emails or phone calls for a few
days now so i just rewrote that paragraph myself.
Patty - your edits were helpful and have been implemented in this version.
Jim, you offered to do some editing, and I would appreciate it. make
comments on content and style. Also, the figures are labeled correctly
however they are not referenced correctly in the text. If you would
fix that it would help out a lot.
Does someone know definitively what the mass and diameter of DANDE
are? I have seen conflicting information (50kg or 80kg?)
When I have the testing section done I will send out rev 03.
-Jake