Souvenir Program Inside Pages

[Aaron Abel Mallari]

 

Dear colleagues,

Please find attached the inside pages of the souvenir program sans list of graduates.

Some points:

Take note of the pages, so as not to be confused with the sequence. :)

The one who will deliver the pasasalamat, Mr. Fonte, is Magna cum laude right? I based it in on the image Bernard sent.

Summer, would you know the maiden middle initial of Dr Aguiling-Dalisay? I can't find it online. For the sake of consistency.

Neeks, I took the liberty of "editing" the theme write-up. :)

Also for the about KAPP write-up I made minor editing with word usage and sentence constructions.

For your comments, corrections, and suggestions.

I call upon the proofreader in all of us. :)

Thank you!

Best,

Aaron

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Aaron Abel Tolentino Mallari
0917.630.8920
aaron....@ymail.com
mallar...@gmail.com  

Graduate Student, Master of Arts in History
Department of History
College of Social Sciences and Philosophy (CSSP)
University of the Philippines-Diliman

[Ma. Theresa Payongayong]

Dear Aaron,

Please find attached draft souvenir program with some highlighted/strikethrough texts for minor editing such as:

1.     nanunumpa o (p. 20)

2.  Delete “pinakamalaking kolehiyo batay sa bilang ng departamento at surian” (p. 1)

3.  Delete “rin” (p. 1)

4.  Delete “na” (p. 1)

5.  pinakamalaking kolehiyo (p. 1)

6.  antropolohiya (p. 1)

7.  ay nagtatagumpay (p. 1)

8.  ipinagdiriwang (p. 2)

9.  kasaysayan (p. 2)

10.  Lumberto G. Mendoza, MA (p. 19)

11.  Grace H. Aguiling-Dalisay, Ph.D. (p. 18)

12.  Magna cum laude – to be checked on Monday (p.  3)

13.  MARIA THERESA D. UJANO-BATANGAN, Ph.D. (p. 3)

14.  Ugnayang Panlabas (p. 17)

 

Thanks for this draft.

Tess P.

1.     

[Jean Franco]

Dear Aaron, I was also told that Dr. Nemenzo normally does not use his middle initial but will further check tomorrow. Best, Jean --- On Sat, 4/20/13, Ma. Theresa Payongayong <mttpv...@yahoo.com> wrote:

[Aaron Mallari]

Noted Ma'am Jean and Ma'am Tess. Thank you! 

Aaron

Sent from my iPhone

[Bernard Caslib]

 Dear Aaron,

Salamat sa pagrebisa ng write-up ng tema. Gagawi ko pa lang sana. :)

Dalawang punto lang:

1. Sa pahina 2, 

"Nililinang ng KAPP ang kamalayan na ang pagkatao ay hindi isang proyektong pang-indibidwal lamang;

bagkus nakakawing at produkto ito ng pulitika, kultura, wika, diskurso at tradisyon na

siyang nakaugat at hinubog naman ng ating kasaysayan at karanasan bilang isang

bayan." 

Hindi ba dapat may "sa" pagkatapos ng "nakakawing"? At kung ganun, wala na dapat "ito".

"...bagkus nakakawing sa at produkto ng pulitika..."

2. Sa listahan ng Pamunuan ng Kolehiyo, si DJ Garcia ng Geog ay may MA, subalit sa listahan ng mga kasapi ng komite, wala syang MA. Pwede ba nating masigurado kung sya ay tapos na o hindi pa?

Salamat dito. :) Maganda.

Bernard

From: Ma. Theresa Payongayong <mttpv...@yahoo.com>

[Bernard Caslib]