Everyone,
I have been looking through the document. It needs a lot of editing. Some parts are not well written.
In regards to security: If a section is allocated to someone and they see that it has to do with security, please talk to me before you write it. There are places like the Description and other that touch on security and I would like it to be uniform.
Laura, are you in charge of the editing? There are many run on sentences and such. Needs to look better.
Assaf