Looking for critique partners + to expand my writing circle!

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Lea de Sousa

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Dec 6, 2023, 4:04:30 PM12/6/23
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Hello, :) 

I have a few projects in the works but my current focus is a YA urban fantasy novel. I've hit the 40k mark (the goal is 80k) of my first draft and feel the story would greatly benefit from some external input. Nothing too constructed or serious, just idea sharing and thoughts.  

I'm looking for a critique partner who can give developmental critique, share comments on a chapter-to-chapter basis or bounce ideas off of for plot or character discovery. And, of course, I'd love to give this all back (or anything else needed!). 

The last books I read and enjoyed were If We Were Villians by M.L. Rio, Ninth House by Leigh Bardugo and The Poppy War by R.F. Kuang. I'm a big lover of fantasy and lit fic and those are the genres most of my work ends up being. 

Contact me via email if you think we could help each other! 

Olivia Danielle

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Dec 14, 2023, 12:31:29 PM12/14/23
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Hi Lea,

I'd love to connect and chat about writing! I also have a few projects in the works, and need someone to talk through some ideas. I usually write in the YA/NE fantasy space, but my current project ended up as a historical fiction without any magic (which was a bit of an accident).

I also loved Ninth House! I just finished What Moves the Dead by T. Kingfisher and Bone Season by Samantha Shannon.  My favorite book this year was The Spirit Bares Its Teeth by Andrew Joseph White, which I will talk about on loop if no one stops me.

Feel free to email me if you want to see if we'd be a good fit.

Amanda Kelley

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Dec 17, 2023, 10:30:13 PM12/17/23
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Hello Lea! 

I'd love to chat and see if we'd be a good fit! I'm looking for someone for the same reason. I also have 40ishK on my current WIP. It's an NA Fantasy Romance. I sadly have not read any of the books you have listed, but have them all on my TBR and hope to get to them soon! 

Feel free to email me at amanda...@outlook.com if you'd like to discuss writing and books and see if we'd be a good fit for critique partners!

shinjini ray

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Dec 17, 2023, 10:37:01 PM12/17/23
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Hi Lea!

We Were Villains and Ninth House are some of my absolute favorites! That along with Maggie lets me know our genres are pretty well aligned. I'm currently working on a contemporary fantasy novel as well, but it's new adult and a bit bulkier. I'd love to talk with you guys, and maybe make a workshop group together and take a look at a few chapters at a time of each piece. Shoot me an email if you're interested, and I hope I'll get to read some of your novel sometime soon!

Shin

Holland Ward

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Jan 29, 2024, 10:34:32 AM1/29/24
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Hi Lea!

I'm two months late to the party, but I'm interested in your story if you're still looking to build a community :) TBH I love the developmental stage of a novel and find giving feedback at that stage to be particularly fulfilling. 

My writing name is Holland (they/them, she/her) and I've got a upper YA/New Adult steampunk fantasy book that's in revision. I've got one critique partner already but would love a fresh perspective on the novel now that it's a fuller draft. Curious if you'd like to swap a few chapters and see how it goes? A little more about it:

Analeigh Beckett knows that if she remains in Grenwich’s West Fork slums, she will die. Choked to death by the smog or crushed beneath a spinning loom in the factory, she will be buried with all the other gutter rats in the city just like her father was. 


So when the men in nice suits recruit her colleague Andrew to be an engineer on a fancy airship instead of her, she does what she must: nick his letter of employment and get on the ship in his place. 


Her mother warns her that the skies are no safer than land. Unexplained explosions, magic cores gone missing, and pirates once imprisoned sighted again. But the coin is far better, the beds are much warmer, and she can finally afford a frock without holes. And for the first time in her life, she thinks she’s making friends. 


Marilyn Lee, an apprentice healer, is preparing to take the assistantship exam that will determine her future in the profession. Duncan Fairtree is a conduit—a conductor of magic—struggling to convince the magistrate that he can be trusted again after nearly burning down the ship in a fit of heartbreak. Together with their friend Jesse Helm, the four must manage the turbulence of early adulthood as the Windcrest comes face-to-face with a ship disaster that nearly costs them all their dreams…and lives.


Following multiple perspectives, HEARTHSWORN is a 150k new adult steampunk fantasy adventure with series potential that may appeal to fans of Tara Sim’s TIMEKEEPER trilogy or V.E. Schwab’s SHADES OF MAGIC trilogy. Since dreaming of this book at 15 years old, I’ve followed an academic path in English literature through to a master’s degree, as well as a graduate certificate in folklore studies. I write stories and articles for a university that involve far less magic and too few explosions, much to my dismay. 


Content warnings include: depictions of violence and gore; descriptions of anxiety and depression, self-doubt; past emotional/mental abuse in a queer relationship; depictions of Industrial Revolutions-age poverty and poor working conditions; excessive alcohol consumption; recreational drug use. 


Let me know! 
-Holland

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Savannah Bard

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Feb 1, 2024, 8:06:03 PM2/1/24
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Hi Lea, would adore getting involved in an active writer community to help each other and chat. Do you know what platform you're looking to build the group on?

Tres Chic

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Feb 11, 2024, 2:01:18 AM2/11/24
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Hello, looking for the same as well...currently I use the Reedsy app to app and we can work together on the app without leaving the project. Please let me know if anyone is interested in collaborating with me. I am up in chapter 7 at this point.

Olivia Danielle

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Feb 18, 2024, 4:12:59 PM2/18/24
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Hey friends,

I've used Discord for a few non-writing groups and like it pretty well. I've never used Reedsy, but I'm happy to give it a try.

Would anyone be interested in meeting over Zoom or something similar? If we get up and rolling, I'd love to know who I'm working with!

Savannah Bard

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Feb 18, 2024, 10:05:21 PM2/18/24
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I like the idea of Discord in particular, though I'm interested in using Reedsy in this way. I actually didn't know it was a possibility. 
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