Seeking Crit Parner 125k Epic Sci Fi Romance 1st draft

[Dani Johnson]

Blurb:

In a world without water, on a planet without science, Laney, a monk's bastard, relentlessly pursues the knowledge of natural law. When the colonial outpost's monthly delivery of life giving water fails to arrive from the unknown cosmos, chaos ensues. Political institutions shake, religion cracks at the seams, and Laney is the only one to unravel the mystery of what happened Before, and what to do next to save them all.

But will Aleyks, the brazen, beautiful monk she rescues from near death in the desert badlands of her home, be the key to unlock the answers she needs? Or will their yearning be her downfall? 

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CW: graphic violence, explicit sexual intimacy, panic disorder

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Hi there! My name is Dani. I'm seeking a CP for the completed first draft of my manuscript. Someone fluent in sci fi, Romantasy, and/or other subgenres of SFF preferred. Interested in doing an excerpted sample trade first to determine compatibility prior to agreeing to a full trade. I read widely, so I'd be a good partner for most adult genres, but I lean SFF in the storytelling that excites me the most. 

Currently working on my developmental edits and could use some more focused suggestions than I got from my alpha readers!