Critique Partner Request: A Family Unraveled - Fantasy novel that explores themes in international relations, LGBT, and Ecopunk.
Corey Jones
Howdy, y'all!
I just recently finished my second(ish) draft of my story and would really appreciate a critique partner. I will critique your work while you critique mine. I would prefer we do a few chapters a week so we can give in depth feedback while also allowing time to make edits/revision.
Synopsis:
Renissa Cartiano is fighting for her homeland, for her people, and the family she lost. Her trial with the committee of Central, the intergovernmental agency in control of international relations among the most populated isles, is an in depth look at her own history and that of her island's blatant disregard for human life. Renissa must convince these bureaucrats to take action before her people fall to ruin. Renissa believes that her only hope for her people, and her family, is intervention from this hegemon.
Myka Cartiano is stranded on Sindell, recovering from the loss of those he held dear. His life, once comfortable and easy, has become a nonstop struggle after an attack on his family by the Managerium, the group that controls the Beasts that make modern life possible. Alone and afraid, how will he survive the island that killed his family?
Currently finished at 50k words, I am looking for a partner that will critique:
word building
narration/dramatization in scenes
pacing
character development