Looking for Critiques - Adult Secondary World Noir Fantasy (Mystery)

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AB C

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Feb 1, 2026, 5:30:05 PM (9 days ago) Feb 1
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I plan to enter a "novel opening" contest and want to validate the state of my novel's first two chapters. I am willing to critique in exchange of course, and I am open to extended partners, as my novel is currently in revision.

I have critiqued 3 novels, end to end, and provided feedback for dozens of chapters for other novels. My previous critique experience has been in fantasy and science fiction, with some historical fiction experience.

My novel:

On a frozen moon where body heat is both life and currency, Master Investigator Eiri Alva arrives in the gritty frontier town of Nyby to solve a series of horrific murders. The victims are frozen solid, their internal heat (rakrana) spilled, wasted.

To catch the killer, Eiri sets aside the grief of loss to identify a conspiracy that spans politics, profit and piety. To do so, he must rely on an arrogant trade master he despises and an unknown outcast from a forgotten species native to the continent. Together, they navigate a web of clues to identify the culprits and the underlying plot supporting them to halt the escalating violence.

Written for those who enjoy a deep, detailed world fleshed out in all its gritty glory, SIMALA’S HIDE layers unique cultures, biology, corruption, mystery, moral ambiguity, political intrigue, prejudice, and fanaticism. Think of the forensic, biological world-building of Robert Jackson Bennett’s The Tainted Cup colliding with the gritty, non-human noir of Dan Stout’s Titanshade, sprinkled with a tiny bit of the political intrigue of George R.R. Martin’s A Song of Ice and Fire.

Savannah Bard

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Feb 2, 2026, 1:49:16 AM (8 days ago) Feb 2
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Hi there! I’d be happy to take a look. I’ve got a southern gothic queer horror I’m polishing up for queries, so if you’re down, we can exchange, and if we like each other’s vibe, perhaps we can exchange full manuscripts. I’ve worked with multiple critique partners and have done several chapter exchanges in many genres.

Ben Cass

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Feb 2, 2026, 3:13:32 PM (8 days ago) Feb 2
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I've had the chance to exchange critiques with Craig.  This is a great story, and his feedback is very fair and helpful.  
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