Seeking critique Partner for my first few chapters of my Paranormal Urban fantasy Ya book

[Carly Aranea]

hi I'm Carly(well that's the name I go by) I am looking for a partner to go through my first chapters and give their honest opinions on my characters and the story overall just from the first impression.

[Kat Burgess]

Hi Carly, I can definitely give your few chapters a look through!