Hi, I'm Frieda Rahn. I'm looking for 1-2 critique partners for an adult, character-driven SFF trilogy with a mythic tone, multiple POVs and arcs involving deities and AIs, and the humans between them.
I'm mainly looking for feedback on:
- whether the characters feel engaging and consistent
- whether the stakes come through
- whether the humor/banter works
- how the POV balance feels
- whether the themes connect smoothly
I’m new to critique exchanges, but I’m thoughtful, honest, and respectful in my feedback. I focus on clarity, emotional logic, and the reader experience.
Happy to exchange sample pages to see if we’re a good match.
Best
Frieda