Short Horror Story Swap

[Teri Harwood]

I'm looking for a critique partner for a short horror story.

Title: Creak Genre: Horror Word Count: 2,400 Deadline: September 27, 2026 Type of feedback: General feedback on the plot, pacing and character development. Does the story work? Is any of it confusing? Blurb: A horror writer rents a centuries-old house hoping to bring atmosphere to her stories. She’s about to get a real reason to be afraid of the dark. Trigger Warnings: None

[Teri Harwood]

I can't update my post, so adding here.

My post is for a critique swap, not for a paid beta reader project. I've gotten a bunch of replies from people who are paid beta readers. Please don't reach out if you are offering a paid beta reader service of any kind. I am not interested in that.

[David Reads]

Hi! I’d definitely be interested in reading this. The idea of a bargain-basement superhero trying to save the world while also trying to get a date sounds like a really fun concept. 

I’d be happy to give it a once-over and share my honest thoughts and suggestions as a reader. I like that you’re not looking for anything overly structured, so a casual exchange of feedback sounds good to me.

If you’re still looking for someone, feel free to send it my way!