Hello, I go by Carly. I am a teen writer that is looking for a critique partner for my book. I know about a while ago I said I was looking for one to review my first eight chapters but this time I'm going to get someone to review at least half of the book. I'm still in the phase of self editing my manuscript, but I just want someone to give it a look on opinions of the plot and characters.
This book is about a group of Seraphims that got caught into a mess with the Goetic demon Malphas. This story isn't fully accurate with the Goetic demon lore but has them and two of the Arch angels.
Trigger warnings for story
- Gore
- Brutal Deaths
- Lung cancer
- Cursing
- Suicide
Things that will be in the book:
- Seraphims
-Demons/Goetic demons
-Mentions of witches but no witches
-Multi POV
-Sub plotted romance
-Unhinged friendships
-Mentor trope(but not a really good mentor)