Can someone criticize my script? Please, no plagiarism or theft.

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Kevin Vang

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Aug 16, 2021, 10:17:17 PM8/16/21
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If you want to correct grammar errors, up to you. However, I am looking for which scene needs to be fixed. Please, do help me with my script since I am trying to make it better.

It's my manga comic book that I am doing.
Oscillate EP1.pdf
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