Just so you know, if I’m your editor, I WILL be leaving comments on your manuscript like:
“Omg if she doesn’t kiss him RIGHT NOW I’m going to lose my ever-loving mind”
“Okay, okay, I see what you did here, but did you have to throw the brick so goddamn hard?!”
“I’m going to crawl into this story, grab him by the shoulders, and start shaking him and yelling at him until he finally decides to TELL HER THE TRUTH”
“THIS BITCH!” (To a villain moment)
“The audacity is on point. Give me more.”
Haha :)