Still looking for Vampire critique partner

[Davi Mai]

You don't have to be a vampire to work here, but it helps?  (groan)

I'm halfway through this novella and its yet to have anyone else's eyes on it.   If you like edgy stories with dark themes, a sprinkling of humor and probably too much hanky panky, then we might play in the same ballpark.

I can read, and hopefully help with, sci-fi, fantasy, horror, humor, erotica (as long as there's some kind of plot), thriller, crime.  Pretty much anything except poetry or pure romance. If its a story about a city woman returning to her childhood town to pack up her departed mother's things and re-do the old house, and she uncovers family secrets while meeting the man of her dreams - I'll probably scratch my eyes out. Apart from that... lets see what ya got? :-)

[Bukky Grimes]

Hey! This made me laugh especially the vampire line 😄 Your novella sounds right up my alley. Dark themes, a bit of humor, and some messiness? I’m in. I’m happy to give it a read and share honest, helpful feedback. I also read in similar lanes (sci-fi, fantasy, horror, thriller), so a review could work if you’re open to that. No small-town return + surprise soulmate stories here, promise.

If you just want fresh eyes on what you’ve got so far, let me know how you’d like to do it. Looking forward to seeing what you’re cooking up.