Seeking Beta readers or Critique Partner Cause I don't have one

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Destiny Wilson

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Jan 2, 2025, 10:33:10 PMJan 2
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I've been writing this book for over a year and is looking for it to get published and getting a literary agent I just need someone to read it and give me their honest feedback. Hope you enjoy

Genre: Contemporary YA fiction, BIPOC, Realistic Fiction, Diverse
Short Summary: Word Count:81,896

Title: If You Didn't Seize Me

Summary: Ciara feels her life was ruined and changed forever ever since she fell 12 feet down from her middle school steps and now has a neurological disorder called Epilepsy that took control of her brain, entire existence, and identity. Then she meets Lydia who too is going through Epilepsy together the two become inseparable and create a bond like no other. Ciara feels like Life has now given her something more than just her epilepsy like Love, true friendship, and happiness all the things Lydia means to Ciara. And fears now that things might change between them as Lydia tells Ciara she healed from Epilepsy the one thing she feels is holding them together. But Ciara's life takes a huge turn for the worse and changes even more when she wakes up the next morning after having a sleepover only to find her best friend dead due to a fatal seizure she had in her sleep. And more secrets about her Best friend is revealed secrets she never knew about through reading her diary and what Lydia's life was like before her life was tragically taken away and the secret suffering she went through without telling Ciara. Making Ciara's new life without her best friend harder to live in knowing she was all the life she ever had.

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