I think it is also better thats Cas9 is not too much expressed, so that you don't overload the cells with cas9.
In addition it is possible that the 2a autoproteolytic seqence is problematic in your specific cell type?
What I would suggest is that
1-co transfect px458 with a bit of pMax or pEGFP-N1 (or pEGFP-C1) and check 24h later. If you get a lot of cells expressing GFP, then it means normally that the transfection is ok and that it is not the reason for low gfp with px458. (If px458 is inhibiting transfection, then pMax should also not be transfected, and then you will get low number of gfp positibe cells, at least using lipofecyamine, I don't know how co-transfection works with nucleofection or electroporation).
2-you co transfect px458 with puromycin expressing vector and select with puromycin 2 days then let the cells grow and check for cutting in the bulk population. If with at least 3 different guides you don't get any cutting then there is probably a problem with cas9 expression (that could explain low or poor gfp).
3-you can transfect px458 and you can try to stain your cells with anti-Flag and/or anti-GFP to check if cas9 and gfp are expressed by your px458 pasmid.
4-try also to check your cells transfected with px458 under the fluorescence microscope using PBS in your well instead of the culture media (sometimes it allows to show low GFP expressing cells)
5-I assume that you want to use Px458 in order to FACS-sort the cell, and thus I think that the only way to get decent GFP signal for sorting is to cotransfect px458 with anothr vector encoding GFP (pMax or pEGFP).
I hope that these small things will help.
Keep us updated with your progress :)
Indeed I could barely see (by epi-fluorescence) any GFP expression in either cell type. Only in case of C2C12 I could find some cells with relatively low expression.. wondering why this is the case I stumbled over this post.
FACS analysis, however, also only showed rather low transfection efficiencies (~2%). Co-transfecting pMax in lower amounts might help sorting generally more GFP+ cells.. also the puro-thing sounds like a good idea.. may also try it ;)
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For analysis of bulk cell, I run a normal PCR that gives an average 200bp product, centered on the cutting site. I run this PCR on a 2.5% agarose gel. Normally if you have indels you should get heteroduplexes formation which will give you about 2 bands on the gel (1 band similar to WT and another one 5-10b higher due to heterodulexes). You have to run the gel for quite long.
However it is hard to quantify efficiency with this method.
Your method of sequencing is also good I think. I have not tried yet.
For my transfection protocol, 24h after transfection, I start puromycin selection for 48h, then I stop selection and keep culturing for 3 to 4 days (just to amplify and get a lot of DNA).
I never did any kinetic to know when cas9 starts cutting but I believe that 24h after transfection, it should have already cut (and this is corroborated by my assay with the puromycin reporter that is active already at 24h).
Did you check that the target sequence in your neuroblastoma cell line is not mutated or does not contain SNPs in wild type cells?
What you could try is to modify the Cbh promoter of px459 by a CMV or sv40 promoter (by cloning or recombineering)