Hi Mel,
I like the edits. Great.
I added us to the top of the grant with institutional affiliations,
and also added Danny Barnes, as he will be a full-time collaborator
this summer.
I called Danny and Sebastian out as undergraduate collaborators,
because SIGCSE likes that kind of thing. Flaunt it if ya' got it, or
something.
Added a bit that we have small bits of funding from other sources, so
that it is clear we're asking for a reasonable/small piece of the
puzzle here. Also makes clear that neither I nor Jan are requesting
any funding support (nor, for that matter, Mel, but this probably
isn't the best grant for that.)
I'm going to head in to the office to do an NSF support letter, and
will do a full read/edit then. We're over 1000 words, but it's
actually pretty concise... and that's 1000+ words with references and
headings, so I think we're OK.
Cheers,
M