FW: Comments on PGDEL

[Nutan Bharati]

Thanks!
Let us have responses and content related matters discussed at our discussion group: content...@googlegroups.com
Requesting all members to update their pages as soon as possible ie ASAP...
Regards

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From: Anuraag Awasthi [mailto:anuraag...@hotmail.com]
Sent: Thu 6/28/2012 9:13 AM
To: rajendra...@gmail.com
Cc: sja...@yahoo.com; Nutan Bharati; dp...@uou.ac.in
Subject: Comments on PGDEL


Dear Rajendra,

Please find below a few comments on the uploaded pages :

- 'Work in Progress' message still appearing on top
- http://wikieducator.org/PGDEL/Courses : The word 'Objective' to be changed to 'Learning Outcome'
The word 'eLearning' to be changed to 'e-Learning'
- DECP01 : Units 2,3,4,5 not yet uploaded, so cant be reviewed.

- http://wikieducator.org/PGDEL/DECP02 : In 'Learning Outcome', <br> to be modified to ':'
- In the 'Introduction' paragraph, 'visited to a historical place', remove 'to'
'what others are thinking on your views' to be changed to 'what others are thinking of your views.'
'What you will do .....?' to be changed to 'What would you do?
'Seems to be difficult task' to be changed to 'Seems to be a difficult task'
- Couldn't connect to the video. BlogsClick here to view the Video <http://www.commoncraft.com/video/blogs,> ,
- DECP02 : Units 2,3,4,5 not yet uploaded, so cant be reviewed.

- DECP03 : No Unit uploaded.

- DECP04 : No Unit uploaded.

- DECP05 : In Table of Contents heading, the word 'TOC' is not required.
In terms of look and feel, I believe this is going to be the template for all modules. Please finalize.
- The content is still not completely uploaded here.

Regards,

Anuraag