Awhile ago, I did a post looking at the various ways you can successfully end a zombie novel. In this post, I want to look at how to start one. Here, the main issue is where along the time line of your particular zombie apocalypse do you drop into the lives of your character(s) and meet them for the first time?
There is a couple of points which I think you might find useful for future stories. Firstly, in your story, all the dangerous situations are resolved quite quickly (often by just shooting the zombies), and it would help to build tension if your characters found these situations a bit more difficult to resolve. As a general rule, a story will have more tension in it if the characters fail twice before they succeed and escape from a dangerous situation. As an example from your story, when your characters are trying to get out of the canteen, you say:
I reached him and then he led everyone (about 70 students) into the plane. The time span from us going through the airport to when we were seated was a complete blur. One moment we were seated waiting for instructions and the next we were boarding the plane.
Everyone took a seat and 20 minutes later after everyone had settled, the plane started taxiing through the runway. We finally took off and we flew north. According to the plan we were going to stop in Austin, Texas to refuel and then make a beeline for L.A.
We entered two buses that were saved especially for us. These buses were occupied by all 70 of us. These were the numbers: 62 students, 3 teachers and 5 parents. It took 20 minutes to get to the hotel where we were going to stay. I got room 205 which had only one 2m by 6m window.It had a really awesome view of a brick wall. Best view in the world.
In the morning (around 7) we ate breakfast in our rooms. After everyone had showered and got dressed up (around 9 somehow) we went down to the lobby and got ready to go out and do another round of museums, historical places and that sort of things.
After I said this a man busted through the front door and he then fell to the floor. The doorman was nowhere to be seen. Since I was closer to the man I went to help him. When I was 5 feet away from him I saw that his clothes were all bloody. I kneeled to help him up I saw dozens of bites that went from being in his neck to his back and legs. In a split second the man jumped on top of me and started trying to bite my face off. Even though he looked human what I saw in his eyes scared me more than him trying to eat me. I saw nothing, no pain, no guilt, and no humanity.
Apocalyptic and post-apocalyptic fiction is a subgenre of science fiction in which the Earth's (or another planet's) civilization is collapsing or has collapsed. The apocalypse event may be climatic, such as runaway climate change; astronomical, such as an impact event; destructive, such as nuclear holocaust or resource depletion; medical, such as a pandemic, whether natural or human-caused; end time, such as the Last Judgment, Second Coming or Ragnark; or any other scenario in which the outcome is apocalyptic, such as a zombie apocalypse, cybernetic revolt, technological singularity, dysgenics or alien invasion.
The story may involve attempts to prevent an apocalypse event, deal with the impact and consequences of the event itself, or it may be post-apocalyptic, set after the event. The time may be directly after the catastrophe, focusing on the psychology of survivors, the way to keep the human race alive and together as one, or considerably later, often including that the existence of pre-catastrophe civilization has been mythologized. Post-apocalyptic stories often take place in a non-technological future world or a world where only scattered elements of society and technology remain.
The apocalypse event may be climatic, such as runaway climate change; natural, such as an impact event; man made, such as nuclear holocaust; medical, such as a plague or virus, whether natural or man made; or imaginative, such as zombie apocalypse or alien invasion. The story may involve attempts to prevent an apocalypse event, deal with the impact and consequences of the event itself, or may be post-apocalyptic and set after the event. The time frame may be immediately after the catastrophe, focusing on the travails or psychology of survivors, the way to maintain the human race alive and together as one, or considerably later, often including the theme that the existence of pre-catastrophe civilization has been forgotten (or mythologized). Post-apocalyptic stories often take place in a non-technological future world, or a world where only scattered elements of society and technology remain.
Other themes may be cybernetic revolt, divine judgment, dysgenics, ecological collapse, pandemic, resource depletion, supernatural phenomena, technological singularity, or some other general disaster.
The relics of a technological past "protruding into a more primitive... landscape", a theme known as the "ruined Earth", have been described as "among the most potent of [science fiction]'s icons".[2]
Ancient Mesopotamian texts containing the oldest surviving apocalyptic literature, including the Eridu Genesis and the Epic of Gilgamesh, both of which date to around 2000-1500 BCE. Both describe angry gods sending floods to punish humanity, and the Gilgamesh version includes the ancient hero Utnapishtim and his family being saved through the intervention of the god Ea.[3]
The Biblical myth of Noah and his ark describes the destruction of the corrupt original civilization and its replacement with a remade world. Noah is assigned the task to build the ark and save two of each animal species in order to reestablish a new post-flood world.
The Biblical story of the destruction of Sodom and Gomorrah also has post-apocalyptic elements. The daughters of Lot, who mistakenly believe that the destruction had engulfed the whole world and that they and their father were the only surviving human beings, conclude that in such a situation it would be justified - and indeed vitally needed - to have sex with their father in order to ensure the survival of humanity. Such situations and dilemmas occur in modern post-apocalyptic fiction.
A similar story to the Genesis flood narrative is found in the 71st Chapter of the Quran; however, unlike the Biblical story, the Quranic account explicitly claims that the deluge was only sent to the tribe of the Prophet Nūḥ (نُوح) ("Noah" in Arabic), and therefore, the deluge did not engulf the entire world.[4][5][6]
In the Hindu Dharmasastra, an apocalyptic deluge plays a prominent part. According to the Matsya Purana, the Matsya avatar of Lord Vishnu, informed the King Manu of an all-destructive deluge which would be coming very soon.[7] The King was advised to build a huge boat (ark) which housed his family, nine types of seeds, pairs of all animals and the Saptarishis to repopulate Earth, after the deluge would end and the oceans and seas would recede. At the time of the deluge, Vishnu appeared as a horned fish and Shesha appeared as a rope, with which Vaivasvata Manu fastened the boat to the horn of the fish.[8][non-primary source needed] Variants of this story also appear in Buddhist and Jain scriptures.[9]
The Norse poem Vlusp from the Poetic Edda details the creation, coming doom, and rebirth of the world. The world's destruction includes fire and flood consuming the earth while mythic beasts do battle with the Aesir gods, during which they all perish in an event called Ragnark. After the destruction, a pair of humans, a man and woman, find the world renewed and the god Baldr resurrected.
Such works often feature the loss of a global perspective as protagonists are on their own, often with little or no knowledge of the outside world.[11] Furthermore, they often explore a world without modern technology[12] whose rapid progress may overwhelm people as human brains are not adapted to contemporary society, but evolved to deal with issues that have become largely irrelevant, such as immediate physical threats. Such works depict worlds of less complexity, direct contact,[12] and primitive needs. It is often the concept of change as much as the concept of destruction that causes public interest in apocalyptic themes.[13]
Since the late 20th century, a surge of popular post-apocalyptic films can be observed.[17][14][13]Christopher Schmidt notes that, while the world "goes to waste" for future generations, we distract ourselves from disaster by passively watching it as entertainment.[18] Some have commented on this trend, saying that "it is easier to imagine the end of the world than it is to imagine the end of capitalism".[19][20][21][22]
Lord Byron's 1816 poem "Darkness", included in The Prisoner of Chillon collection, on the apocalyptic end of the world and one man's survival, was one of the earliest English-language works in this genre. The sun was blotted out, leading to darkness and cold which kills off mankind through famine and ice-age conditions. The poem was influential in the emergence of "the last man" theme which appeared in the works of several poets, such as "The Last Man" by Thomas Campbell (1824) and "The Last Man" (1826) by Thomas Hood, as well as "The Last Man" by Thomas Lovell Beddoes. The year 1816 was known as the Year Without a Summer because Mount Tambora had erupted in the Dutch East Indies in 1815 that emitted sulphur into the atmosphere which lowered the temperature and altered weather patterns throughout the world. This was the source for Byron's poem.
Mary Shelley's novel The Last Man (1826) is a continuation of the apocalyptic theme in fiction and is generally recognized as the first major fictional post-apocalyptic story.[1][23] The plot follows a group of people as they struggle to survive in a plague-infected world. The story's male protagonist struggles to keep his family safe but is inevitably left as the last man alive.
Shelley's novel is predated by Jean-Baptiste Cousin de Grainville's French epic prose poem Le Dernier Homme (English: The Last Man [1805]), and this work is also sometimes considered the first modern work to depict the end of the world.[24][25] Published after his death in 1805, de Grainville's work follows the character of Omegarus, the titular "last man," in what is essentially a retelling of the Book of Revelation, combined with themes of the story of Adam and Eve. Unlike most apocalyptic tales, de Grainville's novel approaches the end of the world not as a cautionary tale, or a tale of survival, but as both an inevitable, as well as necessary, step for the spiritual resurrection of mankind.
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