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Apr 16, 2019, 12:56:58 PM4/16/19
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Hello..


Here is my next poem:

More about my way of writing poetry..

I am a white arab, and i am a gentleman type of person and i am more
sophisticated, why am i more sophisticated? because that's the way
of my writing that tells you about me, the way of my thoughts
tells you more about me, this is is why i am loving my kind of poetry,
because in my poetry i have to show like the right doses of
"wisdom" and "love" , this is the most important part of my
poetry, you have to know that i have never learned how to
write poetry, i am just "inventing" fast and writing fast my poems, but
this is the right occasion that shows you how i am made from the inside,
because i think that the inside of a person is really really important,
this is why you have to feel my poems , because i am writing
them with my "inside", look for example at the way i am
writing them, this shows the kind of person i am, i am giving
more importance to "wisdom" and "love", but does those two words
model more correctly the way of morality ? i think yes, because wisdom
is the quality of having experience, knowledge, and good judgment, and i
think that wisdom gives laws and the way of politics etc. and when i say
logically both "wisdom" AND "Love" , it is understandable by logic
that wisdom is constraining more to be to be in accordance with
morality, this is why you will notice from my poems below that i am
taking care of morality.


So i have to be more smart this is why i was listening
to the following song of Killing Me Softly With His Song ,
so i have just decided to smartly write a poem to show that i am also
capable of writing beautiful poems, so here is my new poem,
read it listening at the same time at this beautiful song of
Fugees - Killing Me Softly With His Song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKOtzIo-uYw


And notice in my poem that i am using the word "Tempo",
so here is its meaning:

"The word tempo came into English by way of Italian, tracing all the way
back to the Latin word tempus, meaning time. It was originally used to
describe the timing of music, or the speed at which a piece of music is
played. For example, a soothing song would be described as a slow tempo
song. Tempo is still used in this way to describe music, but you’ll also
hear it used to refer to pace or speed in general, as in — "the
increased tempo at the end of a close basketball game" or "the slow
tempo of action in a novel."

Read more here:

https://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/tempo


So here is my extended new poem:


I am a white arab nor a yellow nor a negro

As my studio is wanting from you to follow

As my game is a more sophisticated tempo

As my Tattoo is saying to you a beautiful hello

As i am participating for you to this beautiful show

As my beautiful heart and soul are climbing far from above

Since it is as it is a morality of the right dose

Since it is as Liberty is coming with the right effort

Since Liberty is what we have to adopt

Since it is as it is coming from the Lord

Since Liberty is justice and love and order

Since my Love is not the mess of desorder

Since my soul is made of a beautiful scent of amber

And thus the blues is making me dance

As the life is also a game of chance

And thus the blues is making me chant

Like an Ant that is doing his paint

Because it is as it is as infinite as we are told

Because it is as angels are talking from above

Because it is as it is a descent from the Lord

Since even our mirror is telling us hello and good evening

Because it is our destiny that is coming

Because it is our past that is calling

Because the new and old is coming and going

Because it's like a good morning and good evening

Because it is as our destiny that is running

Because progress is exponentially stepping

As wisdom is like the King

As it is the way of morality my darling



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.
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