I correct a last typo in my new poem , please reread

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I correct a last typo in my new poem , please reread:

I will explain more my following poem, so that you understand it more,
i will explain the following part of my poem that is more difficult to
understand:

"And when I hear the wind
And when I look at the sun
I see your heart beating
Like the beat of the wings of the little birds
Because like the delicacy and like caresses
Moderation is faithful to us and it is wisdom"


When i say:

"And when I hear the wind
And when I look at the sun"

You have to read it also symbolically, the wind is also the wind of
change of our humanity and the wind of progress of our humanity.

So when i say:

"And when I hear the wind
And when I look at the sun
I see your heart beating
Like the beat of the wings of the little birds"

Now you are more capable of understanding , that it means
that i am "constantly" thinking about you, and when i say:

"I see your heart beating
Like the beat of the wings of the little birds"

I mean by it that since the little bird is
weak, so the beat of the wings of the little birds
is also weakness because the little birds are weakness,
so it means that i am understanding that the beat of
your heart is also weakness, because everybody wants
to live much more 100 years, so the beat of our heart becomes
also weakness that doesn't permit us to live much more than
100 years, so i am understanding it and thinking about this weakness
and thinking about you.

This is why after that i am saying the following on my poem:

"Because like the delicacy and like caresses
Moderation is faithful to us and it is wisdom"

It means that i am delicacy etc.

And here is all my poem, please read it:


Like my candle in my hands

That I turn on to chase the evil one

Like my candle in my hands

I hear the wind of freedom blow

On our souls and on our hearts

Since the angels also hear our beautiful love song

Since also through silence and thunder

Life calls us to the measure and wisdom

Like the song of the pretty nightingales

Like the heartbeat of a pretty nightingale

We will walk with delicacy and with wisdom

To challenge the wind of evil

Since i am an Arab man of the beautiful oasis of the desert

And as the oasis and fountains

I always defy the torments of the desert

Because i am a proud arab man

Because i am an Arab man of wisdom

So i walk towards the light

Like a Rainbow

Because my story is multicolored

So I go back to my multicolored land

Because diversity is also wisdom

Since we feel the desert

Since we feel the silence

Like the wind blowing

Like the cold and the hot

Like the day and night

This contrast of diversity guides our essence

Towards the right perfection

Because diversity is also the path

Because diversity is also the light

So we are perfection and we are love and we are progress

And when I hear the wind

And when I look at the sun

I see your heart beating

Like the beat of the wings of the little birds

Because like the delicacy and like caresses

Moderation is faithful to us and it is wisdom



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.