What I see is you never rebooted. When you do anything on the PI that requires supervisor privileges you need to do "sudo" You needed to do "sudo reboot".
I am not sure what you have accomplished? You had issues with power on of pies to. Download the clusterhat.sh program that turns all the pis on / off. Do not change that in any way.
Download the script and make it executeable. "sudo chmod ugo+x ./clusterhat.sh"
If you created the pis according to the instructions....
1) Upon boot do "sudo ./clusterhat.sh on all". (you do not need to "sudo" if you changed permissions for everyone, but I did not make it executeable for all.
2) when you want to shut down do "sudo ./clusterhat.sh off all".
As long as you can ssh into each of the zero pis you are good to go.
If you cannot ssh you need to either create the /boot/ssh file. "sudo touch /boot/ssh". //* best to do this when creating images..... after flashing image on pi zero. whatever volume you use add the /boot/ssh to command.. In my case the SD card is mounted as /Volumes/boot. So do a "sudo touch /Volumes/boot/ssh" which works to create the ssh file on the /boot partition.
You need this as the PIs now look for it to enable the ssh service.
At this point you should be able to "ssh <ipaddresses> of pi. This is tricky on the clusterhat.sh. I followed the first three pages of Robs instructions at it worked great... The pi zeros actually are bridged individdually to the pi 3. Each one is a seperate network.
Follow these instructions... (Note: You may have to swap wlan0 and wlan 1. I had to the second time I did it. )