Collation Work of English Booklet 怀集纪念手册英文校对工作

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王三木

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Jun 13, 2009, 8:15:50 AM6/13/09
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Dear All,
     The 1st edition of english booklet is done, it was translated by our students and volunteers who are not very good at English, so we need some experts to collate it. I made a plan of collation:
 
Lucy: P1~P12 Red Words
Robert: P13~P18 Blue Words
Uncle A.Y.: P19~P28 Orange Words
Mr. Liang: P29~P38 Black Words
 
      Please make underline on your collation. It's better to finish your work before June.20. Please send your work to my email: wang...@gmail.com.
 
Uncle A.Y.,
     May I ask Mr. Liang to join this work? Would you send this email to him?


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English Booket of Huaiji Teaching Activity.doc

Ye Yibin

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Jun 13, 2009, 5:20:44 PM6/13/09
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三叔把correction拼错了.
除了个别字词外,我还对某些段落进行了改写和删减.
我怀疑大家把目的搞错了,
在我看来翻译既不是目的,(也不完全是手段.)
制作英文版小册子的目的是面向英文捐赠人读者宣传我们的组织和活动,
建议的手段是参考中文版的小册子的文章来制作

看得出原译者非常用心,大部分翻译得很好.
但是有些中文部分的句子本身写得较粗糙,没有仔细修改,
直译成英文以后不知所云,惨不忍睹就很正常了.

Brief Introduction of Liu Zhu Pei Miao Primary School


Schoolmaster: Zhi Weirong

Liu Zhu Village, which has a population of more than 3,300, lies on the north of the Qiao Tou town, of which Liu Zhu Pei Miao primary school located at the center district. The school, with profound cultural background, was established in 1965. With the hard work of several generations, Liu Zhu Pei Miao primary school has been developing better and better.

At present, the Liu Zhu Pei Miao primary school is the only primary school in Liu Zhu Village, with 566 students, 12 classes(including pre-school), and 18 teachers, (of whom 5 female, 10 with senior titles of primary school. 12 with junior college degree).

At present, the school covers an area of 5100 square meters, of which 1294 square meters for construction area. There are two buildings in the school. (One was donated by the local villagers and other individual donors, while the other was contributed by Hong Kong Pei Miao company and other individual donors).

The numbers of award-winning views of the competition participated by teachers and students is increasing year by year.

l      In 2006, Liu Zhu Pei Miao primary schools’ Young Pioneer Team won the third prize in reviewing the guard of honor; In the same year, they won the third place in the competition of telling security story

l      In 2007their essay of Eight Dos and Don'ts won the third place; Mr. Chen Fucheng have been rated as "outstanding instructor"; Two teachers, Liu Zhansheng and Lou Yingxiang, were awarded 'the advanced teachers' in the town;

l       In 2007, the paper "to improve the interest in writing for primary and secondary school students " written by Miss Lou Yingxiang, won the third prize in the county. She also participated in the teaching of Chinese reading public class and won the third prize  in the competition;

l      In 2007, our school student, Su Shucun, won second-class reading and writing contest awards; Mr. Zhou Rurong got the Guiding Award as well.

l      In 2008, Liu Zhu Pei Miao Primary school's Young Pioneer Team was rated as "excellent Young Pioneer Team";

l      In 2008, Liu Zhu Pei Miao primary school‘s students took part in the festival and cultural performances and won the third prize in the town ;

l      In 2008, two teachers, Liu Zansheng and Kong Ailian, were regarded as 'advanced  teachers' in the town ;

l      In 2008, Mr. Zhi Weirong was awarded third prize in the teaching basic skills contest.

 


I Play: The Story Shows All of Us

Anjie Yao

Everyone has a desire to show himself/herself, hoping to be noticed and praised, or showing his/her uniqueness.

By acting the roles in the stories, the engaged students can get a chance and a platform to tell their inner feelings. We also expect the children to realize the importance of showing themselves and that standing on the stage is not so terrible as they thought. As a result, they will have the courage to catch any opportunities in their future.

It was a lesson “Without Chairs”. Instead of passive sitting, they all stood up to be the host and show their uniqueness. Though the children were shy, they tried their best to present the whole story by “taking action and experiencing”.


As it was not my task to guide them, I missed many interesting parts, but luckily, not all of them. What stroked me most was The Mountain King of “Savage and Priest”. Because of his shyness, Shu Jun, who actually looked like The Mountain King, spoke in a really low voice. So I went to him and tapped him on the shoulder, and said, “How can you speak in such a low voice? You are not like The Mountain King at all! ” This really scared him. We all laughed and let encourage hem. He replied:”OK!” but when he opened his mouth, again, low voice, just like a pricked ball. We couldn’t help laughing again. His problem is lack of experience, I suppose.

Another funny game was “Students Who Skip Classes”. In that mountain village, at this embarrassed age, most boys and girls dare not talk to each other, not to mention body touch.

To our surprises, the show “Students Who Skip Classes” was actually performed!

A little girl acting the role of the mother tweaked a boy’s ear and scolded, “How could you cheat your mother?” It was out of the students’ expectation as the action was so exaggerated! How can a girl tweaked a boy’s ear like this? Almost all the performances made us excited. It’s much better than we had expected before.

As for me, this activity is beyond itself. So many pleasant memories have stuck in my minds after playing and laughing with the children. It is hard to express my special feelings. They are just my brothers and sisters, who remind me of the wonderful song <Childhood>, of the innocence we once have like them, and bring us so much energy and dynamism. With love and care, we were approaching every pure mind we had ever met. This is really a wonderful and unforgettable experience.



2009/6/13 王三木 <wang...@gmail.com>



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Ye Yibin

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Jun 13, 2009, 9:37:23 PM6/13/09
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看来还是我的意思没表达好.
是说不需要忠实中文小册子原文直译,
这样吃力又不讨好.
有些不好翻译的句子完全可以按照大概意思用英文重写缩写,
不重要的干脆删掉.
比如那篇六竹小学关于按照三个代表思想指导工作那段就被我删了.

2009/6/14 王三木 <wang...@gmail.com>
我怀疑大家把目的搞错了,
在我看来翻译既不是目的,(也不完全是手段.)
制作英文版小册子的目的是面向英文捐赠人读者宣传我们的组织和活动,
建议的手段是参考中文版的小册子的文章来制作
 
不解~
是将中文小册子翻译过来的啊~

2009/6/14 Ye Yibin <yey...@gmail.com>



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-Ye

Lucy Tsai

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Jun 18, 2009, 10:15:15 AM6/18/09
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Neo, Sorry I am late. I just returned to HK last night!

 

You have selected good passages for translation, however, the translator should know how to delete the unnecessary parts because to some readers they are not important and may sound tedious. Robert is correct in pointing out the inclusion of the English language is to share with CCPS' foreign friends on what we have achieved and it is important to keep them informed closely.

I have corrected the red prints.  Please let me have final review when you receive papers from all the contributors. Since there are only a few pages in English I would suggest you include two languages in one disc. This time, English be the front part.

See you on 3 July. I will let you know where and time we shall meet. Please ask Leo to join if he has time because he can practice German with my husband and our German guests.

Unfortunately I did not see Robert during this trip but we talked over the phone. We've agreed to make better travelling plan next year in April.

Best, Lucy

 

 

 

 

 

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Love keeps dream flying~

爱让梦想飞翔~

 

Winter Teaching Activity in Huaiji

2009/1/20-22


Index

 

Chinese Culture Promotion Society  1

Volunteers’ Chart. 3

After Winter Teaching from Lucy  7

The Feeling of Winter Teaching Programme  from Caixia Chen  10

Brief Introduction of Liu Zhu Pei Miao Primary School 13

I Play: The Story Shows All of Us  16

I Guess: Lantern Riddle Quiz  19

Passing on love with our hands  23

Rabbit Dance. 25

A Survey of the Students  27

Stories from Afar: Home visiting  29

Artists of Future. 32

Display of Chinese Art 33

It is Our Duty to Save Energy and Protect Environment 35

 

天使之翼第一期First Edition of "Angel's Wing"

主編:Purple  孫曉如 Main Editor:

撰稿:Contributors:陳彩霞  譚春玲  梁享  植秀佳  甘靈枝  黎文傑  黃鳳琴  植欣欣  黎碧珠  陳延龍  梁寧波      禤歡子  龍潔珍  莫遠華  鄧燕玲  姚檢菁  簡嘉瀅  姚安潔

排版:Editing: 三木

特別鳴謝:Special thanks to:   太(Lucy),  歐陽叔叔  植校長 錢老師 

孔令根  Wendy  CiCi    


Chinese Culture Promotion Society

Established in October, 2006

In 2002, the founder Ms Lucy Tsai visited a small village at the border of Guangdong / Guangxi, named Qiaotou which has a population of sixty thousand. The average annual income per family is less than RMB2,000. Obviously there is no way they can send their children to school. Tsai wondered why they did not follow the One Child One Family Policy. Nevertheless, she started to sponsor school fees so that at least young children can go to school. In 2005, another village, Hengshishui, north of Guangdong was added to the programme. A primary school in the village was in a ruin state that it could not accommodate the 200 students from the village. With the help of many kind friends and donors a 18 classrooms school were built. At that time more than 200 primary students school fee were sponsored by Tsai and her friends. Two bright university students from Yingde City were added to the list.

The Society was founded in 2006 and as a charity institute which continues to subsidize the poor farmers’ children education. Since 2007 Chinese Government has enforced 9 year mandatory education policy, all the small children are now free to go to school. This is the biggest improvement and most joyful thing we have witnessed. However, another problem emerged. With the income of the school reduced but the subsidise from the Government never come adequately to improve facilities like the hygenic toilets . Since 2007 the Society’s primary funding was focused on constructing toilets.

In 2007 the Society built two toilets for 1,212 students in XuAn and XuFeng Elementary Schools in Qiaotou village, Huaiji County. In 2008 a toilet for 490 students at the Qinmou Green School was complete.

In 2008 the Society started to sponsor university students. A Kind and old Australian friend of Lucy has sponsored generously the first 10 university students. In 2009, thanks to  new donors, Ms Cheung and Ms Yip, the Society can increase 20 more university students. For this big number another poor area needs to be discovered to select candidates who could qualify the requirement. Meizhou was the next destination. A trip was made in February and a good contact with the school and the authority was established.

The repair of the Qinmou School will be complete in time to hold the summer camp in Huaiji. The Society is dedicated to continue to build toilets for the schools in need. The three toilets the Society built last year have proven very successful as the teachers and students are in joint effort to manage and to keep clean the facilities.

We encouraged the students to participate in the teaching programme to share their knowledge with the less privileged children and to appreciate what they have.

 


Volunteers’ Chart

lucy

Lucy

Taiwan-born, grew up in Japan, Hong Kong permanent resident

钱老师

Qian Sir

Hong Kong permanent residentteaches English in Qiaotou since 2001

purple

Purple

We call him Robert now, PhD in Italy

晓如

Little Fish

South China Normal University, Junior

令根

Linggen Kong

Graduated from Huaiji first high school, works in Guangzhou

阿楚

A Chu

Graduated from South China Normal University, works in Guangzhou

春玲2

Chunling Tan

Guangzhou University of Traditional Chinese Medicine, Freshman

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Xiang Liang

South China Normal University, Biology, Freshman

佳佳

Xiujia Zhi

Jinan University, Freshman

灵枝

Lingzhi Gan

Guangdong University of Technolgy, Freshman

欣欣

Xinxin Zhi

Guangdong Financial Institutes, Freshman

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Bizhu Li

Xiamen University, German, Freshman

延龙

Yanlong Chen

Guangdong Financial Institutes, Freshman

凌波

Ningbo Liang

Shantou University, Freshman

彩霞2

Caixia Chen

South China Normal University, Freshman

欢子

Huanzi Xun

South China Normal University, Computer, Freshman

洁珍

Jiezhen Long

Guangzhou University of Traditional Chinese Medicine, Freshman

远华

Yuanhua Mo

Guangdong University of Technology, Freshman

检菁

Jianjing Yao

Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, English, Freshman

Jane

Jane Jian

Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, News, Freshman

安洁

Anjie Yao

Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, English, Freshman

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Yanling Deng

South China Normal University, History, Freshman

Neo Wang

South China University of Technology, MBA, Senior


After Winter Teaching Programme

Lucy

10 April, 2009

Dear all,

On 2nd November 2008, that was the first gathering since our Summer Camp in August, Uncle A.Y. suggested on this occasion to you all:  how about a winter teaching programme. I was weary because you just came to the big city and you are still struggling to cope with your first year at the university, how are you going to handle the pressure. It seems a bit over demanding! But to my total surprise, those of you present raised hands high and determined, and quickly you fixed among yourselves and a date was set, 2009.01-20 -22. This is 4 days prior to Chinese New Year and in the farm you have thousand of things to do, and yet you were determined. I was impressed. Here once again I want to thank Purple for his ingenious planning and organizing skill. Also Chun Lin, the only volunteer not from this county, she is from Qingyuan City, another 380 km away, and she came one day earlier to Huaiji to join you!

What I was most concerned is the lodging and in order to save money we tried not to stay in the inn. Here I want to thank Ling Gen and his family from bottom my heart that they took in more than half of us. The rest of us were able to stay with teacher Chin. Chin’s careful management of our expenses  had been very helpful. For three nights we totally took over Ling Gen’s small two wood fire burners kitchen. Every night we came back tired and hungry but as soon as we returned to Ling Gen’s home everyone regained energy, those in charge of cooking and washing were in full force at work, those lazy ones played games without shame shouting, screaming and laughing…What a beautiful picture. Those three dinners, although with one big portion of something each time (with only 3 yuan a meal what can one expect). The last meal I made an extra dish: eggs fried with green onion and proven a great success. I must say, these meals were so delicious that I will forever cherish the memory. It was not the food that counts it was the sharing, it was the energy and it was the youth. Those who had helped in cooking, washing and buying groceries etc. I want to say, you had done a good job! I sincerely hope if circumstances permit we shouldn’t spend so much time on such errands, we should reserve some quality time for better use. But again, we still have to watch our expenses.

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Last but not least, I want to congratulate Uncle A.Y. for his suggestion. You did not object, suspect, surrender, withdrew nor felt uncertain, you happily accepted this mission. In the last 72 hours you have made a great impact on me by your determination, patience, compassion and industriousness. I hope you will keep in close contact with one or two of the special kids you got close to. And with your influence they should be encouraged to get to study as high as to university level like yourself.

In conclusion may I make a toast: YOU HAVE MADE IT!

There are more dedications like this in the future: ARE YOU READY!!

Lucy

 


The Feeling of Winter Teaching Programme

by Caixia Chen

What a great feeling for me in these three days:  “we’ve harvested a lot  although we were tired.” In conclusion, how would my winter vacation be like if there was no Winter Teaching Programme.

At the beginning we were skeptical about ourselves because it was the first time that we have to stand on the platform to teach and without adequate preparation. The children were quiet, motionless but concentrated, and even a little shy. The first class was held by Xinxin on the first day. But, they changed a lot in the process. For example, we planned to visit the children’s home and have lunch with them on the first day and it was us who requested them to take us to their home. But on the second day and the third day, they took the initiative to invite us. What is more, they became talkative and initiated conversations. They then performed bravely on stage with sign language song taught by us, and danced happily on stage boys and girls together. Boys and girls usually don’t speak to each other because of the old fashion behavior in the country side. We are so thrilled to see this big changes in them.

Simple games such as calligraphy and painting, health information, social dance, which are something so ordinary for us but brought surprise to the children.  An old discarded book or a simple description of the outside world seem to them like opening up a wide horizon to them. When they surrounded me and listened to my describing the life in university they were so eager to ask questions, I suddenly realized that my words were so important and powerful. At that moment, I want to stop the clock hoping that I can share with them more what I know so I can help them to fight the obstacles of being living in such remote with layer and layer of multi-mountains.

Minhong Yu said, "The real move is from that you have done something you think you cannot do ". I would like to say "The real move is also from those who do what you think they cannot do"

When we walked on the village lanes, all we can see were simple mud-brick houses, muddy roads, multi-mountains, layer and layer……Their living condition is so poor yet it never impede them to show hospitality to guests. The rice that they usually were stingy to themselves  were generously servedThose chickens they have raised for half a year were offered to us. We moved to tears  when we saw these opulent produce placed on table.  Xinxin said, that such sight is very common in this region but we were so overwhelmed and we shall never forget for the rest of our life especially when you encountered such first hand.

The innocent smiling faces of those children had been deeply emerged in our minds and unconsciously urging us to excel ourselves. We should improve our teaching skills to give more to the children and we will do so in our next programme. In retrospect, we realized there are problems in this activity. We lacked preparation, inexperienced and unsatisfactory division of work responsibility. We learned now to make adequate preparation as early as possible, and we should lift the level of our teaching.  In conclusion I believe that we can do better next time.

At any rate, together with the children we have gained a lot from each other from these precious three days. The CCPS (The Chinese Culture Promotion Society) seeds of love have planted root deep in this land of HUAIJI, and it is growing. We are proud to be part of it!

 

 

王三木

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Jun 20, 2009, 10:08:03 PM6/20/09
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 大家辛苦了,周四到周六因为出差,未能上网。
现在校对工作已经完成了。

2009/6/18 Lucy Tsai <vosi...@netvigator.com>

Lucy Tsai

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Jun 21, 2009, 4:08:30 AM6/21/09
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Hi, welcome back! So do you think the dics will be ready when I come on 3 July? Do you agree we group both languages in one disc. I believe there are space. This time, English should be the front part.
Look forward to seeing you.
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