Hi October,
This is a good start.
At first blush, I think the TN table provides helpful guidelines - particular monsters, powers, other triggers would likely have static Fear TNs (Note: Seems I missed including Fear as an Enchantment Power - I'll remedy that soon enough).
My only *suggestion* is something like this:
Critical Success (CS): Not even a shiver, and no need to make a Fear check next time you confront this particular horror.
Normal Success (NS): No effect - you're steadfast
Normal Failure (NF): You're shaken, but still capable of action; roll on the Fear table
Critical Failure (CF): You're too scared to even piss yourself; roll on the Unhinged table
The Fear table entries are good - I like that you've represented all these mechanically (and, thanks for including Stun). Unhinged as a Flaw works very well - the only addition I'd make there is the chance of a relapse if, after "recovery," the same threat is confronted.
Thanks for sharing this. Cheers,
-- Erin
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