Fwd: AJRCCM Islands perspective

[Ryan Hunter]

Trying this again...

Here's a few comments from me….

MUCH better!! Almost there.

[Katrine Whiteson]

Hi Guys,

I am attaching a slightly cleaned up draft that still contains comments from Ryan and Kirk for your consideration. For example, Ryan suggests we might not need to include a re-analysis of the Goddard/Singh data, because our point comes across without it. Let me know what you guys think about that idea...

Thanks to Robby, this draft also contains a new release of Figure 1.

I just alphabetized most of the author list, and any feedback on that is welcome.

Please send comments this week (before Monday Nov 11th at the latest).

:)
Katrine

p.s. I also attached a couple examples of AJRCCM pulmonary perspectives so we can get a sense of what they look like...

[Jonathan Kirk Harris]

Katrine,
I like the idea of just pointing out the 3/6 samples in the Goddard analysis looked similar. It doesn't suggest that they performed the analysis incorrectly like the re-analysis might, and still supports the main point we're going after.

Fig 1 still has what appear to be 3 main branches coming off the trachea. That might be an issue given our venue.

Do we need suggested reviewers for this?

Kirk
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