flyer pdf
Sam Edgecombe
Oleg Izyumenko
Great idea and very relevant info! Just some minor comments:
* advice 2: shouldn't it be "att uppmärksamma DEM" in Swedish part?
* advice 4: wouldn't it look better to say: "turn off appliances
completely when not in use" (I don't know how to formulate in Swedish)
* advice 5: we would spare people a big research if we put some
ready-made options for them in parentheses (mentioning only those
providers who employ wind and solar, not large-scale hydro). So it'd
look like:
5. Byt till en elleverantor som levererar fornybar energi från vind
och sol (t.ex. o2, Falkenberg Energi, Kraft&Kultur; se
www.elskling.se). 5. Switch to a renewable wind/solar electricity
supplier (for example o2, Falkenberg Energi, Kraft&Kultur; see
www.elskling.se)
* advice 8: better to make it more precise: water boiler (is it
"vattenkokare" in Swedish?).
* advice 9: too unclear. Couldn't it be better to say: walk and cycle
more, take public transportation instead of driving a car.
* advice 10: could be nice to add: ", especially inside Sweden and
Europe" (", speciellt inrikes och inom Europa").
Otherwise it's a brilliant flyer, and I just want to hug you, Sam!!
Sincerely,
Oleg